Bewitchment of a Blasphemy

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-01-04 04:24 PM

No. It's not a simple life.
There is no parity.
There is no rule, no measured speak--
and I've no clarity.
Everything of hurt, entwines,
each raw nerve touches another.
Every hurt is amplified
as pride of cry is smothered.
All my pain and teeth in clench,
every restless moment spent.
Every footstep toward the door
and every footfall back for more...

Oh damn my life! Be it undone.
I rock myself to sleep--
pounding head against the wall
to prove I can still weep.

I have to let it go, I know.
I must let this be.
Brave a trail of tears again -
to journey on my blistered feet.
Yet angels' choir of memory,
in harmony of seraphim,
bewitchment of a blasphemy
oh may I dream? please...
dream of him?

* * *

--reworked, repost from DP #2--

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-04 04:27 PM

This is absolutely excellent. You know, no matter how well things go sometimes it really is true, without dark, there would be no light.

My perception of truth will somehow never quite be the same..and so I write.

OWG
Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 155
California

2 posted 2002-01-04 04:32 PM

well heck...you can dream of me...that is if the noise of the hog don't rattle you awake all night...

dug it ..well done

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

3 posted 2002-01-04 06:39 PM

You are so amazing!! I've read this through over and over again and each time.. I feel more..

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2002-01-04 06:52 PM

Sigh...ok...dream but don't touch! Loved this one missy!!

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-01-04 10:31 PM

serenity - most telling, as you do.. Let it go, but not to dream of him...

BC

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-01-04 10:35 PM

Oh serenity I love your lines.wonderful
floria

"Oh damn my life! Be it undone.
I rock myself to sleep--
pounding head against the wall
to prove I can still weep."

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2002-01-04 10:56 PM

Keep writing until you write him right out of your heart. Hugs and peaceful prayer chants are on the way.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-01-05 04:16 PM

Me thinks you have about summed up a ton of
feelings in this one...Nicely done...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-01-05 04:21 PM

(sigh) I can feel such sorrow in these words, sweet friend, pace through the trail of tears, sweet friend, and write down how you feel, for we are always here for you, and hold all your dreams close, for joy and relief will come your way very soon! (kiss on cheek) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

10 posted 2002-01-05 05:35 PM

Thank you all...this one IS an oldie...but sometimes things nag at me until I fix them...and I'm still not satisfied with this one...laughing here..sigh..

Thanks you all!

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