Open Poetry #18 |
Join Me In Paradise |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Take my hand and I will lead you To a garden seat made for two We'll sit beneath my beautiful birch tree And while away the hours, me and you The worries of the world Will be left at the garden gate And together we'll admire this beauty That Mother Nature did create The sweet fragrance of gardenia Will bring our senses to the fore While around us the first Autumn leaves Begin to fall on the grassy floor A symphony of birds Sing out their repertoire So very beautiful are their songs Being heard from near and far Tranquility, peace and harmony Are three words that come to me As we sit here in my garden Enjoying this beautiful scenery My very own piece of paradise Is welcome for anyone to share So if you're having trouble finding me Chances are I'll be there Suetang |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh yes....I love it...I love it...A paradise garden of serenity....Magnificent...*giggling* now I know where you are when you aren't at Passions *grin* **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous heart always sings with the beauty of love, nature, and harmony, may you always have the most beautiful dreams then when you write them down, I will always be here to read them all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Does sound like paradise...James |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
All the senses awakened by this poem Sue!! wonderful imagery and emotion!!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well you invited me to your garden before and I hope you will never stop inviting us there. This was lovely Sue. ~* Carpe' Diem *~ |
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