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DayDreamer99
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0 posted 2002-02-04 06:45 PM



I didnt think you would die
Tears fall down my face as I slowly cry
I dont understand how you are gone
I just want you to know I loved you all along
I wonder how it would be if you came back home
I didnt want you to be alone
I dont know what else to do
You got your wings and finally flew

                               By:Tiffany

*to Edward...Bro,I Love You..Miss You And I Know You Are Up There Smiling At Me,I Know Im Making Ya Proud,Still...I Have My Moments When All I Do Is Cry,And I Hope You Are Waitng For Me,I Still Need Your Help Down Here.....*

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2002-02-04 06:46 PM


My condolences are with you, I'm so sorry for your loss

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee



strbbux
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2 posted 2002-02-04 06:48 PM


Tiffany, darling, My daughter is also going through this, but she is 31, she lost her brother and I my son. It hurts, I know how it hurts, it does help to write poetry and talk to people, keep posting, and pray. (((hugs ))) floria,

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Fee
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since 2000-08-07
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Melbourne, Australia
3 posted 2002-02-04 07:24 PM


It never seems fair to loose one close... I know and my heart goes out to you.
He is watching and guiding and proud of you. Keep strong.

Hugs Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

Startime
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4 posted 2002-02-04 07:45 PM


Oh sweetie...I am sure he is watching and cheering for you....My heart goes out to you in your pain. **big big hugs**I wish there was something I could say to help. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-02-04 07:51 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Tiffany, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and your loss. (sigh) I know deep down with all my heart your brother will never forget you and will always guide you with your love, for you are a very loving person and deserve the greatest happiness always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, all our heart and prayers are with you always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiffany, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus
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6 posted 2002-02-04 07:53 PM


Tiffany...this should serve as a reminder to
those of us who still have our brother or
sister...Maybe it is time to pick up the
phone and call...To tell them we love them..

I am sure your brother loves what you have
written for him...I know I would be pleased..

Larry C
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7 posted 2002-02-04 08:24 PM


Tiffany,
What a wonderful tribute! Don't stop writing. I really like this. Peace.

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2002-02-04 09:42 PM


DayDreamer99 - my thoughts are with you, and my prayers...

BC

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2002-02-04 09:56 PM


Hugs Tiffiny...James
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10 posted 2002-02-04 10:20 PM


Tiffany~ my big brother's name is Edward too....my heart goes out to you sweetie...*hugs* for you
brianbeaudry
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11 posted 2002-02-04 10:37 PM


Hugz of compassion Tiffany, he is looking down on you and he is still helping you. Be strong and pray to him dear friend.
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12 posted 2002-02-04 10:38 PM


Tiffany ~ I can't tell you how sorry I am for your loss and the pain you will feel while grieving.  I lost my best friend this year, and if it is any help to you, we are closer now that ever, and I talk to her all the time.  She guides me when I am open to her. I moved through it by celebrating her life, and all she stood for, and I hope you are able to do the same for your wonderful brother.  May peace come to you.

~* Carpe' Diem  *~

Madame Chipmunk
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13 posted 2002-02-04 10:50 PM


I am so sorry for your loss, Tiffany...and I know how painful it is to lose someone you love, especially if they are much to young to die.  My first husband died in May of 99 and then just 14 months later, in July of 00, my older son died very suddenly and tragically.  Your brother is looking down on you from heaven...and he is now your guardian angel.
Your beautiful poem is a lovely tribute to him. ((hugs))

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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