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speaking easy whispers
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speaking easy whispers |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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they spoke in easy whispers thoughts from you to thoughts from me the sounds forming shapes of hearts rooted deep in the essence of honest conversation when they spoke in chirpy tones thoughts of you with thoughts of me my fatigue used to vanish - still fades when I think of you special were moments of us when love spread in little words unique like rare diamonds amongst ordinary stones ah! the ache of memories is a lesson in torment felt like sand-castles falling amidst rapid wave surges in moments of high tide sweeps they say the moon is to blame for the rise and fall of tides I don’t question their wisdom - love often rains in moonbeams all I know is it was good dancing in the silver rain when our simple thoughts drew hearts by speaking easy whispers ~~~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very beautiful! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ah! the ache of memories is a lesson in torment felt like sand-castles falling amidst rapid wave surges in moments of high tide sweeps Beautifully written..loved the whole poem..nicely done..  ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful my friend |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my fatigue used to vanish - still fades when I think of you special were moments of us when love spread in little words unique like rare diamonds amongst ordinary stones ================================ they say the moon is to blame for the rise and fall of tides I don't question their wisdom - love often rains in moonbeams all I know is it was good dancing in the silver rain when our simple thoughts drew hearts by speaking easy whispers =================================== Sud this is such a lovely write... the imagery is wonderfully conceived, and the expression of your emotions are done with a sincere, touching, depth. this is a beautiful bittersweet write... the loss is felt...but the love is held with no regret...thats what I read in the "brillance" of your words. Well done my friend...(and congrats on breaking the big 5)  You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
oh wow... This could make a believer out of anyone! *smiles* ~Tier |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Another lesson here.. how wise and marvelous you are.. you knew .. to remember the love and leave the rest ... simply wonderful Pepper |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 CONGRATULATIONS ON 5000 POSTS! Sudhir this is a wonderful write! If you want to get someone's attention.... Just Whisper. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
What an incredibly stunning poem this is...I love the whole feel of it. Congradulations on 5000...**big hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! BRAVO!!! CONGRATULATIONS ON 5000, SWEET FRIEND, WE'RE ALL SOOOOOOO PROUD OF YOU!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) This is such a lovely poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sudhir lyer~ Oh wow, that last stanza really touched me....this is just beautiful....  Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-04-2002 06:29 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sudhir Your words flowed like a tranquil stream and were extremely beautiful. I'll look forward to reading more of your work. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is simply beautiful sudhir, Your words are wonderful. floria Floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Congratulations on your 5000th post, Sudhir...your poem is beautiful, soft and romantic. I truly enjoyed it!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hello my friend, and how I love your work! easy whispers...once again you bare the beauty of your spirit...wistfully compelling! Congratulations, sudhir, and thank you. It's we who have been blessed by you sharing your gift of poetry! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Newell/Silver Streak, thank you very much... Victoria, thanks ever so much... Interloper, beautiful is muc appreciated, thanks... Janet, your responses have always lifted my spirits... so glad to have you read my work... thanks a lot... Tier~, thank you for your belief... pepper~, your kind words are simply wonderful... thanks a bunch Nancy, I will keep whispering... thanks a lot... Startime, thanks so very much... Noah, your enthusiastic replies always leave a sense of happiness... thanks a lot... Lauren/Greeneyes, thanks for the beautiful response... Sue, see you around.. and many thanks... floria, beauty is how you see what you see... thanks for coming by... M. Chipmunk/Lyra... I enjoyed the perfect picture that you placed... thanks a lot... O Serene one, wistfully compelling is such a pleasurable feeling to know... thank you very much... Regards to all, Sudhir P.S. It wouldn't have been 5000 if not for the wonderful presence of you all... reading you all has been a wonderful experience... and I hope to spend lot of time reading all your works, and adding a few of mine to the topic list once in a while... thank you all once again... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this, Sudhir... and particularly, these lines my fatigue used to vanish - still fades when I think of you Love should be a refuge and respite. *S* If it can still serve as such even after it leaves, it was obviously very special. *S* Beautiful! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you so very much Suthern... so glad to see you here... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Oh my ... how lovely~ 'all I know is it was good dancing in the silver rain' That thought just squeezed my heart with memories~ Thank you, sweet friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you very much, my friend, Marge... such a joy to see you here... regards, sudhir |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
SI, I hope this isn't just a convocation for something lost, but something gained as well. Mike |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
There were lots that were gained, my friend, Mike... lots... but as it happens, memory holds what we lost... Regards to you and thanks for coming by, Sudhr |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
wow to you too.. regards, sudhir |
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