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Fee
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-02-04 02:08 AM


When I am with you
melting in your arms
I know with all my heart
that this has just begun

When I am with you
everything I feel
this is how it should be
you and I know its real

When I am with you
everything seems alright
but what you don't see
are the tears I cry inside

For when I am with you
its easy to forget
when I am with you
I have no regrets

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

© Copyright 2002 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
1 posted 2002-02-04 02:15 AM


Sad but so human.  I am happy for you that you have found such a mate!!!!
Janette
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since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now
2 posted 2002-02-05 10:52 AM


"no regrets"

Living for the moment does have it's rewards and adds to the mind a multitude of lasting memories.

Your words this morning spoke volumes to me ... when in love one just cannot help oneself.

Enjoyed this write lady.

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