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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-02-01 05:25 PM


I'm sure this should have been my name
Valentina, lovers domain
With rich red hair and ruby lips
just living for the next night kiss.

I'm made of romance and desire
so full of love and passions' fire
A valentine sealed with a kiss
A woman born to live that bliss.

I dance under the moon each eve
My lover does not want to leave
A holiday named just for me
silk hearts and roses all I need.

I play softly on cupids wings
his bow and arrow true love brings
I KNOW it's false identity
'Tis Valentina, I must be.



© Copyright 2002 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you
1 posted 2002-02-01 05:26 PM


Then, fair Valentina, I raise my glass to you.

Flowingly done, a picture of your other self.  Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-02-01 05:29 PM


Sandra...writing like this..you certainly
could be just her...

vandana
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3 posted 2002-02-01 05:31 PM


enjoy
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4 posted 2002-02-01 05:38 PM


Ok you mean theres going to be another redhead around here soon..haa...

                  ~Vic

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5 posted 2002-02-01 07:11 PM


Beautifully done, Sandra...You could always dye your hair red!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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6 posted 2002-02-01 07:19 PM




(giggles in delight) Ooohhhhhhhh...I bet you would like beautiful if you dyed your hair red, for you have such a golden heart filled with love and you are destined to sweep the man of your dreams off his feet! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet Valentina!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-02-01 07:36 PM


Thanks for this

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

Enchantress
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8 posted 2002-02-01 08:12 PM


Love this Sandra..I mean Valentina!
Yes!  The personality you describe here could very well be you!   Enjoyed!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

peaches73533
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9 posted 2002-02-01 09:14 PM


Valentina,
I absolutely love this.
Peaches

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2002-02-01 10:16 PM


Enjoyed this Catalina or is it Valentina?  James
Kethry
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11 posted 2002-02-01 10:46 PM


Valentina.
good name good write...but don't forget loves massacre in your namesake.
Kethry.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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Deep in the heart
12 posted 2002-02-04 01:52 PM


So THAT'S who you are!  
I thought you looked familiar.  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Duncan
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13 posted 2002-02-04 01:56 PM


And it fits you...perfectly.
peppermint35
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14 posted 2002-02-04 02:19 PM


Well, Sandra.. by any name u wish .. you are just pure magic!!!

Enjoyed this very much.. hearts and flowers.. and chocolate.. never forget the chocolate!!!

Hugz,

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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15 posted 2002-02-04 08:13 PM


BRAVO!!!The total passion of this name and poem suits you to a T....magnificent....I love it...**big hugs** Now you are reborn as Valentina..the lady the men adore...

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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16 posted 2002-02-04 08:48 PM


Beautiful!

I am many.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
17 posted 2002-02-05 02:40 AM


Valentina - I like this, very romantic...

BC

Janette
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18 posted 2002-02-05 10:31 AM


Sandra Valetina ... I like the sound of that ... Hahahah!

I love the visuals in this one, like dancing in the moonlight with a lover who never wants to leave your side.  Yes, we all want this, at least I do.

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