Open Poetry #18 |
I, Valentina |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I'm sure this should have been my name Valentina, lovers domain With rich red hair and ruby lips just living for the next night kiss. I'm made of romance and desire so full of love and passions' fire A valentine sealed with a kiss A woman born to live that bliss. I dance under the moon each eve My lover does not want to leave A holiday named just for me silk hearts and roses all I need. I play softly on cupids wings his bow and arrow true love brings I KNOW it's false identity 'Tis Valentina, I must be. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Then, fair Valentina, I raise my glass to you. Flowingly done, a picture of your other self. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra...writing like this..you certainly could be just her... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Ok you mean theres going to be another redhead around here soon..haa... ~Vic |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully done, Sandra...You could always dye your hair red! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Ooohhhhhhhh...I bet you would like beautiful if you dyed your hair red, for you have such a golden heart filled with love and you are destined to sweep the man of your dreams off his feet! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet Valentina!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Thanks for this Michael Auguste~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Sandra..I mean Valentina! Yes! The personality you describe here could very well be you! Enjoyed! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Valentina, I absolutely love this. Peaches |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this Catalina or is it Valentina? James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Valentina. good name good write...but don't forget loves massacre in your namesake. Kethry. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
So THAT'S who you are! I thought you looked familiar. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
And it fits you...perfectly. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Well, Sandra.. by any name u wish .. you are just pure magic!!! Enjoyed this very much.. hearts and flowers.. and chocolate.. never forget the chocolate!!! Hugz, Pepper |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!The total passion of this name and poem suits you to a T....magnificent....I love it...**big hugs** Now you are reborn as Valentina..the lady the men adore... Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Beautiful! I am many. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Valentina - I like this, very romantic... BC |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Sandra Valetina ... I like the sound of that ... Hahahah! I love the visuals in this one, like dancing in the moonlight with a lover who never wants to leave your side. Yes, we all want this, at least I do. |
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