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Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-01-29 08:33 AM

When You Wish Upon A Star
By: Noah Eaton
1/29/02

I
look
up at a
star in the
skies, gleaming
in the evening sky
with grace and beauty,
shimmering with a lucid smile as I make my most desired wish
to the star, it winks at me with a ray of light that shines
through my heart with grace and cheer, laughing
joyfully with love and hope, which leaves
me knowing that someday, this wish
will be granted in reality, and
I smile as I continue to see
this star shine in the sky, this
diamond tear of  the angels of the
heavens rushing     light in my eyes,
filling me with.                .great pure love
as pure.                                           .as gold,
and .                                                           .joy

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-29-2002 08:45 AM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-01-29 09:04 AM

Noah sweetie! This is beautiful in both verse and presentation!
..."When you wish upon a star...
...Makes no difference who you are....
...Anything your heart desires will come to you."

*Hope all your wishes come true*
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

N orth Carolina Girl
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

2 posted 2002-01-29 09:29 AM

Noah,this was beautiful and I love the star.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2002-01-29 09:45 AM

BRAVO!!!!Well done, Noah...stars are magical and so is this beautiful poem. I love it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

amigo
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

4 posted 2002-01-29 09:52 AM

Noah...lovely words and great way to present it too...the 'diamond tear of the angels of the heavens'....oh, i love this....thanks for sharing...and, i do wish your wish comes true...

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2002-01-29 11:25 AM

this is great, Noah YOU are great and sweet, kind and a wonderful refreshing person. thank you for being you.

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2002-01-29 11:34 AM

well done noah....perfect work of art

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

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By the Seaside

7 posted 2002-01-29 11:38 AM

this star shine in the sky, this
diamond tear of the angels of the
heavens rushing ~~~~~

Oooooo I like this very much.
Nice presentation Noah~

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-01-29 12:23 PM

Wow,how did you do that? Very cool presentation, and a beautiful poem.
Sandra

sodpossom
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N.C

9 posted 2002-01-29 01:54 PM

Love the poem and star!Very cool!!

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

10 posted 2002-01-29 02:02 PM

Oh my gosh,Noah, that must have taken you a long time to do that,, and the poem is so lovely. great idea. lovely poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

His Poet
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since 2001-12-18

Posts 750

11 posted 2002-01-29 04:00 PM

Noah, we are star gazing. Those of us who read your poetry get a glimpse of heaven. Beautifully written and presented. Cheryl

mauddib
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since 2002-01-12

Posts 119
melbourne australia

12 posted 2002-01-29 04:08 PM

Star light
Star bright
I wish I may
I wish I might
Have this wish tonight

Noah, your star shines brighter than most
It guides we weary travellers home
and the night is not so dark
thanks

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

13 posted 2002-01-29 05:05 PM

love your star..noah dear...lovely..and of course your poem..

~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

14 posted 2002-01-29 05:23 PM

Noah...Have I told you lately that
you are my shining star?

****Hugs and Kisses****

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

15 posted 2002-01-29 05:27 PM

Hello Noah

How very clever you are in presenting this wonderful piece of writing. I hope that all your wishes come true as you deserve nothing but the best.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

dawn to dusk
Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 68
Colorado

16 posted 2002-01-29 10:40 PM

Oh wow, another fun shaped poem! These are awesome. Cool cool. Nice job!

Noelle

"Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

17 posted 2002-01-29 10:42 PM

I always knew that you were clever enough to pen a "shape" poem...and you proved me right

This is very pretty! Excellent work, Noah~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

jennirey
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since 2002-01-24

Posts 198
North Richland HillsTx

18 posted 2002-01-29 10:51 PM

Wow, Again Once more, you Move the world with your words..

How very very pretty your star is..

Jen

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

19 posted 2002-01-30 12:35 PM

You really do have stars in your eyes, don't you Noah? This star design is difficult to do, and you presented it so nicely, you clever romantic guy!

PS the title is in my Plagiarism poem. Hugs, and hope you'll forgive a thief in the night.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (01-30-2002 01:23 AM).]

Hypnosis
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since 2001-12-02

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CO

20 posted 2002-01-30 06:17 PM

This is simply stunning Noah.  I loved how you created this to be in the shape of a star, very creative!  Great job my friend!

     From your good friend
       Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

tulip
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since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

21 posted 2002-02-04 01:19 AM

Wow! Noah, I love this poem!!!!

Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

22 posted 2002-02-04 01:24 AM

the vividness drips from the corners of your star!
man, i love these visual poems....
i'm glad the stars smile at someone...laughing with you.

they're not so kind to everyone. hehehe

*simplify*

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08

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A State of Disarray

23 posted 2002-02-04 01:29 AM

Cool poem. Awesome shape!! Absolutely wonderful!!

Kat

peppermint35
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Posts 1106
Texas, USA

24 posted 2002-02-04 03:51 AM

You know what Noah?? Not only stars shine.. you shine!!! and you shine very brightly!!!

This is lovely and such a nice shape too!!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

25 posted 2002-02-05 09:10 AM

Well done, M-Toe.... beautiful words are enhanced by this superb presentation. *S*

Janette

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Chicagoland for now

26 posted 2002-02-05 10:09 AM

Brilliant writing and presentation ... I am truly impressed!

Martie

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27 posted 2002-02-05 11:01 AM

Noah--This is just lovely!

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