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Farewell Angel
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Farewell Angel |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas 
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I somehow can identify, With your need to flee... On more than one occasion- Has the urge come over me. But there are those who need you, In you they’ve found a stay, A smile, and word of kindness To lighten up their day. A chiding quip, or comment- Eliciting a smile... And giving them the courage, To press on for awhile. Perhaps a mystic princess- To add spice to their plate. I beg you reconsider- Before it is too late. Perhaps it is the wording- Of your writing which inspires- Or your seeming, boundless vigor Does lift the one who tires. So if, and when, you spread your wings- To on your journey go- Remember, mortals love you- On this ball of mud below. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Oh, you could rescue the most desperate damsel in distress with this piece!!! Wow!! What a write. Everybody should read this one!!! Good job! Just believe... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Dear man...I am sure this will touch her heart and soul...Beautifully penned from a caring heart. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
John... Beautiful, touching words. Very tender and loving, I'm sure your angel would love this. However, I must admit that the words that really caught my eye were "On this ball of mud below". Very quirky, I thought. Bec  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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