Open Poetry #18 |
To Feel Thee |
HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
To feel thee My hand gliding empty feels the air Aimless I long feel dire despair Emptiness seems to fill the room Just me, surrounded by a reddish gloom Tranquil mind, oh what have I done I want to feel but it can’t be done Once there was a perception of love When I held you near my dove My hand passing delusive through you Where have you gone? What can I do? My mind playing tricks, the one I dealt Once in my arms, your love I held Now, at this moment I admire My ever-lasting burning desire My desire that is longing for thee Calling your name at night, you see Fulfilling a promise long time past For you my Love I will ever last I only have one love you can steal If only once I thee could feel No breath is ever to replete No men shall set love to delete No touch will ever be complete Without you in my heart so deep No greater feel I can suppose As to feel, your skin my Rose My thirst for you can never be expend With this poem, my Love I send Only one thing remains to be said To feel you, but once I would be glad The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Such yearning fills your beautiful words, sweet friend, may true love forever touch you once more and make you feel glad forever in it's warmth and compassion! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helmut, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Helmut, this is a beautiful Valentine's poem... very beautiful indeed! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I felt the yearning in this, Helmut, and I hope you soon feel her there, and not just air. Nice to meet you! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is beautiful...and it's so nice to see you here sir. Welcome. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sehr Gut... I really enjoyed this read, Sir Helmut.. Nice to see you here as always - We don't see enough of your wonderful work around here... |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Mistletoe Angel Sunshine Midnitesun Poet deVine Nan Thank you, miss you alot If I dare say: Especially warm wishes, love and peace to Sunshine, Nan, Poet Divine whom I admire so much. Thank you Girls The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, Helmut... you've expressed well the longings so many of us know. *S* And it's so great to see you posting again... welcome back! |
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