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HelmutB
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0 posted 2002-02-02 08:22 PM


To feel thee

My hand gliding empty feels the air
Aimless I long feel dire despair
Emptiness seems to fill the room
Just me, surrounded by a reddish gloom

Tranquil mind, oh what have I done
I want to feel but it can’t be done
Once there was a perception of love
When I held you near my dove

My hand passing delusive through you
Where have you gone?
What can I do?
My mind playing tricks, the one I dealt
Once in my arms, your love I held

Now, at this moment I admire
My ever-lasting burning desire
My desire that is longing for thee
Calling your name at night, you see

Fulfilling a promise long time past
For you my Love I will ever last
I only have one love you can steal
If only once I thee could feel

No breath is ever to replete
No men shall set love to delete
No touch will ever be complete
Without you in my heart so deep

No greater feel I can suppose
As to feel, your skin my Rose
My thirst for you can never be expend
With this poem, my Love I send

Only one thing remains to be said
To feel you, but once I would be glad


The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-02-02 08:45 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Such yearning fills your beautiful words, sweet friend, may true love forever touch you once more and make you feel glad forever in it's warmth and compassion! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helmut, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-02 08:49 PM



Helmut, this is a beautiful Valentine's poem...

very beautiful indeed!

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3 posted 2002-02-03 12:55 PM


I felt the yearning in this, Helmut, and I hope you soon feel her there, and not just air. Nice to meet you!
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4 posted 2002-02-03 08:09 AM


This is beautiful...and it's so nice to see you here sir. Welcome.
Nan
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5 posted 2002-02-03 09:44 AM


Sehr Gut... I really enjoyed this read, Sir Helmut.. Nice to see you here as always - We don't see enough of your wonderful work around here...
HelmutB
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6 posted 2002-02-03 04:44 PM


Mistletoe Angel
Sunshine
Midnitesun
Poet deVine
Nan
Thank you, miss you alot
If I dare say:
Especially warm wishes, love and peace to
Sunshine, Nan, Poet Divine whom I admire so much. Thank you Girls

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


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7 posted 2002-02-04 09:30 AM


This is beautiful, Helmut... you've expressed well the longings so many of us know. *S* And it's so great to see you posting again... welcome back!
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