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Mark Coburn Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 71 |
....hi i'm Mark Coburn a wire sculptor/performance poet-musician living in the Highlandtown Arts District....Baltimore,Md.....USA ....this is a piece I wrote on dec. 24 2001 feeling the love.....I did it last night and thursday night to the tune Angie (hey!that's what these 2 guitar players know)and it works... last night we had a fiddle player...and yeah I play my double valve auto-harp (sounds like an organ) C harp..... here we go ...... ------Caballos Loco------- Wildhorses couldn't drag me away from this feeling. Yeah! might say, "I'm reelin'" Warm feelin'coming from the plexus of my inner being. Wildhorses runnin' no floating cross the open plains, trying to wash...write away a bit of pain, the thing that's waiting round the next bend. Wildhorses No dragging me away this time, never going to worry if I've passed my prime, think I'll take a sip (smack my lips)* of this fine white wine Wildhorses take a chance call it Love..... and when you and her are crying drink the tears..... they are from Heaven up above.........Mark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! You sound very "rounded" in the world of artistry...so I think you will like it around here! Please check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! You seem to be quite multi talented. This is a great entrance to our friendly circle. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy Lee~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hello Mark - Welcome to our Passionate world - It's a great place, and you'll surely find a comfortable place among us... I enjoyed your first piece, and look forward to much more...  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Mark. Welcome. Always happy to meet a new artist. Sandra |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Welcome to poetry land Mark. I just know you will love it here and insprire many others!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! STANDING OVATION!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is such a wonderful debut, sweet friend, it is such a pleasure to meet you, I already know you're going to be a wonderful addition to us all! (big hugggssssss) The beauty of loves free spirit fills your words, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Mark, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! We all love you sooooo much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, I can't wait to read more from you!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-03-2002 12:10 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Welcome to passions...This is some wonderful poem you have introduced yourself with...Magnificent...I love it. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Mark! Welcome to Passions! I look forward to reading more from you! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
hey wired one..... nice to see you posting here! sounds like you're out there having a great time!! wired for sound! that's terrific!  |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Yes Mark, welcome and MORE, WE WANT MORE!!! LOL standing ovation! |
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Mark Coburn Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 71 |
WOW.....To all the good people here at passions....this is really a wonderful reception and I am honored to post among such a responsive group ...looking forward to lots of creative interaction with all of you.......Mark |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Mark, welcome to Passions! It sounds as if you are having fun with words and music. I used to play the autoharp. It's really a cool instrument. Oops, but are you referring to the gizmo most people call a harmonica? I did recognize the opening line (with one minor addition), as performed by The Rolling Stones (Keith Richards and Mick Jagger) in their "Wild Horses" song. Yet it's a fairly common phrase, one my dad probably used before the Stones were even born. Rock On, and have fun here at Pips. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (02-03-2002 09:58 PM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
welcome and I love poems written with lyrical qualities and this one has that! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Watch them wild horses…you never know where they’ll take you. Wildhorses take a chance call it Love..... Been pondering that one myself today. Sometimes it’s scary to take the chance…sometimes it’s exhilarating. I like your poem, like the thoughts it brought out. Welcome to passions, hope we’ll see more. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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