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whiskey
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0 posted 2002-02-03 06:37 AM


" Dreaming "

Dreaming
I lay
Thinking of
You

Wishing
That with me
You were
To hold

Imagining
The bliss
Your soft lips
To kiss

Feeling
Hands yours
My body
Touch

Longing
Your Heart
To forever
Hold

Loving
You with all my heart
My soul
Yours


" For Joe "

[This message has been edited by whiskey (02-03-2002 06:43 AM).]

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RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-02-03 11:01 AM


awww this is so pretty. I'll bet Joe will love it! Back up to the top your poem goes!!
BTW..you have really pretty eyes

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-02-03 11:28 AM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your beautiful poems always have me dreaming of the most beautiful things! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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3 posted 2002-02-03 12:12 PM


*sigh* this is so sensual he won't be able to help loving it....I love it....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Gothkitty
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4 posted 2002-02-03 11:39 PM


Beautiful, Joe is a lucky man to have someone so in love with him. Very well done



peppermint35
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5 posted 2002-02-04 04:51 AM


Strong feelings, nicely written.. keep that love burning!!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

Sudhir Iyer
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6 posted 2002-02-04 10:33 AM


lovely...

regards,
sudhir

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