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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-02-02 10:45 PM

“STORM DREAMING”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Sitting at the bay, weather watch,
thunderclouds break, storming…
Pounding rain, ocean waves high,
winds fury felt, all-embracing…

Shadow thoughts of you within,
images empty, in my mind…
Dreams are waiting, to enter,
but for the mist, I’m blind…

Chill the winds that touch,
free inside, it does agree…
Searching out to find you,
real perhaps, but I can’t see…

Forces are beyond control,
storm dreaming, what will be…
Out of the tempest, silhouette,
you’re here, come surround me…
~~~~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-02 10:59 PM

(sigh) Wow, such intense imagery and cadence fills these wonderful words, sweet freind, I hope now your heart has been struck by the lightning of cupids and rainbows of joy fill your skies with true love! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2002-02-02 11:01 PM

Hi Bill---I love storms...something about them charges me...must be the ions. Much enjoyed your poem!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-02-02 11:05 PM

Forces are beyond control,
storm dreaming, what will be…
Out of the tempest, silhouette,
you’re here, come surround me…
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
LOVE THIS!!! YES!!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2002-02-02 11:22 PM

STANDING OVATION!!!!Storms are something I absolutely love...When I was on the east coast I used to love to sit on a cliff and watch a storm come in off the ocean....BRAVO!!! I am sure your ladie of the waves and mist will come to you and watch the storm at your side....well done, Bill. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

5 posted 2002-02-03 12:39 PM

Bill,personally I`m not crazy about storms but I am your poem.LOVED IT!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

6 posted 2002-02-03 01:38 AM

Bill,
Your words have given me the enrgy I get when a storm is paaing.Amazing write and beautiful imagery.
peaches

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

7 posted 2002-02-03 02:35 AM

Bill, you just "blew me away"...

There is something absolutely amazing about a storm.. it's, I suppose, the primitive in us responding to the elements..

wonderful write!!!

Hugz,

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

8 posted 2002-02-03 02:42 AM

Yes, the magnificent artistry of elements captured here in this piece bring chills to my spine. Absolutely stunning Bill.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2002-02-03 04:58 AM

Oh BIll, I love this one! I love storms, any and every one of them...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-02-03 03:41 PM

BC...another superb write..excellent vision
and the feelings flow from within..

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

11 posted 2002-02-03 03:45 PM

Wow, terrific Bill, I just happen to love storms..staying inside with a fire in the pit..lovely feel of this poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2002-02-03 07:59 PM

Bill~

Fantastic write....I love a good storm....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

13 posted 2002-02-03 08:02 PM

Bill, I like the melancholy feeling you pur into this one.....very nice.

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

14 posted 2002-02-03 08:07 PM

Bill this is a wonderful poem.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

15 posted 2002-02-03 09:17 PM

Bill, I swear I like each one of your poems more

Sandra

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