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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2002-02-03 06:39 PM


Crosswinds

Her soul scattered
in the crosswinds
of love’s waning,
she looks within…
amid the debris
of doubt
she finds a strength
birthed in her melancholy

her grasp on
a thinning thread
tightens
in new hope…
hand over hand
she ascends upward
braiding the frayed ends
to a single cord

recapturing moments
forgotten…
her climb eases
in the warmth of
renewing passion
as she opens her
heart to trust…

02-01-02

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

© Copyright 2002 Annie - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-02-03 06:56 PM


Annie this is so beautiful! And, how true that we will hang on to that last thread of hope.  Wonderful imagery here.  Enjoyed.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-02-03 07:05 PM


Annie,  I have to take Nancy's side on this
excellent message...great imagery..

Victoria
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3 posted 2002-02-03 07:21 PM


Trust is a wonderful thing...enjoyed Annie as always hon..hugss

           ~Vic

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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2002-02-03 07:23 PM



Sounds like you're in the middle of a tornado looking out...

I like this!

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-02-03 09:17 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, always clinging on to that last strand of hope is worth so very mcuh always! May her life now be filled with happiness and faith now! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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