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Open Poetry #18

not for a stolen moment

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-02-02 10:22 PM

This picture is so perfect
no matter which way you look, or is it?

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Together they walk the path of life
in a special kind of way
Bound by secret moments
and hearts that arn't afraid

Souls that have no fear
for together they shall fly
life has endless moments
many yet for them to try

Perfect in every way
as the tears stream
from her eyes

Tears of love you say
or happiness and bliss
but not for a stolen moment
but from a tender lovers kiss

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

1 posted 2002-02-03 01:03 AM

Wow.What beautiful words.
Peaches

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

2 posted 2002-02-03 03:10 AM

What a wonderous moment you paint. Beautiful work Fee.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2002-02-03 04:56 AM

perfect, or is it? hmmmm. Made me think. I can relate to those stolen moments well.

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

4 posted 2002-02-03 06:49 AM

Wonderful , very thought provoking

Julie

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-02-03 06:53 AM

A lovely writing, Fee, stolen or otherwise...

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