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Touching the Looking Glass
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Touching the Looking Glass |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Touching the Looking Glass Touched the looking glass today and my name isn't Alice Fingertips clinking vitreous silver but the image wasn't me… imagine my surprise! It was you looking out fingertips clinking vitreous silver Alice would have liked this! Amazing how the touch clinked at the same instance Thought waves waving cross acres and acres miles and miles bringing smiles and smiles through the looking glass making a winter day warmer and brighter I couldn't hear you but heard soft laughing on the wind and knew it was you… For I was softly laughing too… So much you said in what wasn't said but all wrapped up with a bow in the "I understand, I know" and the prettiest floral scent I could ever imagine was emanating from you… I could just hear your voice… Like soft old perfumed hankies, your concern came through and you too read all the way through the lines… Then you didn't let me go… Isn't life amazing? Can you see God's plan? It makes me want to wake up at 4:44 in the morning and say "Wow"… So, soon we shall share lines and words and thoughts, as if watching green buds spring forth And lines will weave us in and the weave will keep us warm… As we birth a friendship and don't even feel the pain. 01.18.01 Revised 02.03.02 and Reposted for a friend... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your writing is amazing - so diverse. I never know what to expect. This is superb, very imaginative write All I can say is WOW! I'm in awe Liz |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh how I love to wake up to find a write like this one waiting for me to sit with my cup of tea and read! You are amazing Karilea, just as this piece is AMAZING! ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Karilea - This was easy for you to write, I'm sure. Imagine how much harder it would have been for Balladeer or Toerag - lol. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooooo lovely, sweet friend, I envisioned Alice Through The Looking Glass but more in your Muse kind of state reading this beautiful poem for your friend! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, ooooohh...I just love your dreamy surreal visions you create, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Another beautiful piece. I Like the Alice references. Sandra |
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