»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #18
»
Leftover Tears
| Open Poetry #18 |
|
Leftover Tears |
|
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
|
Once I had love to burn with flames and passions heat surrounded me enfolding heart and soul with peace such total joy, twas meant to be. I try so hard to readjust to life without loves searing touch It does not work, my heart still craves How is it that I ask too much? I thought that love was all it took I had so much of it to give but somehow most of it was lost like grains of sand in shallow sieve. If it would help, I would still ask or even beg for one more try but it will not, so I am mute while silently, my eyes still cry. |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Sandra - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The moment you stop asking, BAM...there it is... |
||
|
Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Sandra, you are a wonderful person with a lot to give, don't ever sell yourself short. I read the sadness in this poem and I know a little about leftover tears, let's just say this really moved me. Kathleen--(Kay) |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra, when you least expect it....he is going to be looking your way and you had best be smiling. Good write. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
||
|
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
catalinamoon, Tears are God's purest ointment for cleansing our souls Tears let us more clearly see and feel His truest beauty as He prepares us for new love above and beyond all human understanding. Let your tears wash away all of the ugliness of yesterday. God will then give you His deepest love and truest happiness. He meets our every desire in His own magnificent way, when we just release all of our sorrow to him and have faith. Your love is on the way. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Such sadness and yearning fills your words, sweet friend, I know deep down with all my heart that you will have a second chance, and the next love you find is bound to last forever! (kiss on cheek) Our hearts go out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
||
|
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Written from your heart as always sandra..i hope one day your sweet dreams come true..hugss ~Vic |
||
|
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have to agree with Karilea, the minute you stop looking they seem to creep out of the woodwork, but watch out for the slivers A very heartfelt write Sandra.~* Carpe' Diem *~ |
||
|
peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Well done, Sandra.. I shed a few leftover tears myself on reading this.. it touched me that much... Hugs, Pepper |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
been there, done it, know it well |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts...when someone I care for pulls away from me for whatever reason it changes my feelings for them...it's like I want them back but I can't trust them any more...James |
||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - you've written of many of my thoughts. Loninless is of this write, I know the place well... BC |
||
|
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
||
|
Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"... so I am mute" That line just grabbed me, love it! Hang in there sweet lady and I pray that this all passes soon and you can love, again. |
||
|
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
It is not in your hands ... yet. Patiently pay your dues and it will come A beautifully heartfelt write. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
||
|
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
wonderfully written... regards, sudhir |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
