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As a Poet............
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As a Poet............ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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As a Poet to stir myriad feelings daubing colors before you, as a poet might do, this feat, with a simple, solitary line of words to be heard if I could to set thoughts reeling such as a poet should O, I would to splay forth before you a peacock's feather by spill of quill to draw your eye to the eye of plume illumined in green of blue if I could to set feelings pealing such as a poet should O, I would to cause your eye to seek new thoughts and nod your mind as a buttercup bobs on a spring day as words should cast your spirits to fly if I could to breathe beneath your wing such as a poet should O, I would to set before you a state of emotion so that next you glance 'pon the ocean you should feel the crashing waves taste yet the salt that saves if I could sail you thus away such as a poet should oh I would to feed you all that you might desire cause a craving beset by fires cause you internally to crave a need cast before you pearls of seed if I could gift you all this such as a poet should O, I would but mostly, I would set you to loving, craving, needing the word of the poet the song that he wrote by way of placing word to note to cast such feeling in what I wrote if I could… O, I would O, I would repost, untouched, from 01.21.01 |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
oh! you did ...  |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh yes indeed. You could, you would and you did. I liked this one. Joyce |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I love it! I am soooo tired!!!!! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh yes yes yes, YOU DID. I love this so much. great work Sunsine, floria Floria |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Stunning!!! Michael Auguste~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YES!!! You would, you could, you can, and you just did!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) WOW!!! This is fabulous, sweet friend, your peacock quill always dazzles these pages with your Muse and the beauty of fine poetry, we all love you so much! YAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
....and you did.... ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Kari, From the first time I read your poems, you did all of those for me. Thank you for another beautiful poem. Sandra |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
O, sweet little ray of Sunshine, God planted my seed and life watered it. And then you came along with your sweet warm rays of sunshine, and my seed grew, like God planned for His garden. Little buds started to burst forth, and they opened into beautiful flowers of poems. Yes, sweet ray of sunshine, yes! You did! -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You did...you did...you certainly did, Karilea........ You have been blessed with the gift of talent, and we have been blessed with the gift of you.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh Karilea...You did, you do...again and again. This was only one example. |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Yes, Yes and yes....you could, you would and you DID....enjoyed this, Karilea, thanks for sharing... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Very well done, Karilea - Terrific finish |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well you did and you do and that is why I luvs ya so much, sweet poetess! You create such scenery and characters with your words that they are spellbinding. Oh, did I say I loved this? This one has to be entered into that "thingamajig".  ~* Carpe' Diem *~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'm glad you left this "untouched" .... it was perfection as it stands.... and YES ... this needs to be ON THAT LIST We wish ourselves beautiful ... |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I can but repeat.. you most assuredly do and did!!! How lovely this is.. Pepper |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
this is brilliant writing... regards to you Karilea, sudhir |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes, you have |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
As a fellow poet, I am quite moved by this. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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