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Midnight Land |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Midnight Land Each time we meet in midnight land and share a kiss our hearts demand We walk within this nightly dream embraced by one who we esteem We stroll sands of midnight time singing our words of love in rhyme Hand in hand through the starlit night showing the love that will delight We met under a midnight sky in hopes to never say goodbye Against our beating hearts we hold joined in passion the fates foretold Beneath this magic midnight moon with stars singing our lover’s tune A kiss that melts me from inside, a touch that brings such joy I cried Each time we meet in midnight land we listen to our heart’s command When filled with feelings of desire we find we’re lost in eyes of fire Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very beautiful, Karen.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very beautiful piece of poetry! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Karen, this is lovely. I'm not here as much but when I am I read you, thank you for this! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Your passion you do well write of love given by two at midnite. Such beauty within your lines. Wonderfully written, no confines. Karen....you gone and dunnit again... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So this is what you're doing at midnight...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
In Midnight dreams he comes alive returns to me from such divide. Love this, Karen. Even more than usual for some reason. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmm, 'a kiss that melts me from inside'...love this line! Lovely piece Karen....enjoyed. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like the cadence of this, Karen...yep! A good read! |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Karen,as my grandson would say"very nice"   Juanita |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
A very beautiful write. peaches |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Such nice work here. Can I have it? It's in my library.Wonderful!! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Karen - lovely write. I too often wondered what a lady does in Canada at midnight in the moonlight... BC |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
One of your very best and I love it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
enjoyed this very much... regards, sudhir |
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