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Perhaps, Perchance
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Perhaps, Perchance |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Perhaps, Perchance… I find myself in the middle In this place of where and when Thinking that perhaps I’m little And knowing I would go again; Perhaps I slept too long this morn, And missed the sun ray’s beam I only know I saw you there In the shadowy mists of dream… I felt your fingers’ light caress And knew the hold of you I felt the kiss upon my face, Saw footsteps left in dew; Perhaps I slept too long this morn, And missed the dawning light I only know I saw you there In the shadowy mists so white… I saw me, and knew my form But different in my view While watching you look at me As if you saw some clue; Perhaps I slept too long this morn, And missed long shadow’s kiss I only know I saw you there In the obscure bless of mist… If perchance, I sleep again And dream you come this night Wake me up before the morn And bless me with your sight… ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 2 February 2002 |
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Streen Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 169 |
This is such a wonderful poem. I loved it! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very beautiful! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
....EXQUISITE.... ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Such a beautifully bittersweet sentimental expression of longing, sweet friend, I hope now that his shadow has been replaced by the presence of true love to fill your heart forever! (kiss on cheek) Such a beautiful dreamy poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart sometimes there aren’t the right words But then again YOU’VE written them. This is utterly utterly wonderful I love this but you knew I would, I’ve been dreaming a lot lately As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Sigh... beautiful Karilea. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Stunning! |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
It's beautiful Pepper |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful!! |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Mayhaps by chance I like this...  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karilea...you have woven this dream well.. Yet another shining example of your poetry.. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Karilea, this is the most beautiful dream, so visual and sensual. lovely, floria Floria |
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