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A duet or a two, I could do.....Anyone????
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A duet or a two, I could do.....Anyone???? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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I feel the want to once more write as two, not of four. So I ask once again gracefully Will anyone do a duet with me? Tis the fun of the moment nigh that puts a twinkle in this eye. For sharing words is so swell is true fun, can you not tell? The pages will be so graced by thoughts shared, not erased And the moment shall be fun. So please come, but do not run. |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
Can you explain exactly how a duet works  -R. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a duet works most magically a twinkle here, set from "we" a moment rare, or comedically yes, a duet works most magically you take a line, or one, or two and weave it with a poet true a share and share alike shall see a duet formed from a two of "we" a silver thread, a golden line embracing all in its entwine |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Rebekkah...A duet is where two poets write stanzas for a combined poem...Usually alternating stanzas...feeding off the stanza that the other poet submits....Usually done via email from one to the other...Can be any topic that both are comfortable with.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Give me the words that flow as silk Grace me with the softness of pure snow. Drink from the flask of a lover's milk and a duet of two in rhyme we'll bestow. For until the thoughts are once penned and the line has been shared, beginned. This duet of two will remain unsaid and feelings written shall be unread. Thanx Kari... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Somewhere there lies written grace 'tis but a smile beset on yon face where love has been lined by trace 'pon a heart's fluttering pace... 'twas then I saw that a duet was due 'twas then I shared these lines with you to weave a cloth of gilded view perchance a draught of honeyed dew... take the line which meets your heart and wind it so sweet gifts impart... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (cheers in delight) Oh Barry, I would be soooooo happy to write a second duet with you, you always write such wonderful words and I would be honored to write with you once more! (big hugggssssss) Just think of an idea and I'll try to think of one too then we'll work from here! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is exciting! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy this is utterly wonderful and I love it. Why don’t you duet with Sun she is singing beautifully with you, I believe you two would sing together delightfully. Her writing is as wonderful as is yours so maybe the two of you could duet. I would offer myself darling boy but I’m lousy at duets, ask Bill and Keth they had to do all the work and I just coasted on a wing and a prayer. Your writing does shine so wonderfully darling boy and I know whoever you duet with it will be wonderful   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I would be honored sir if you would have my free verse to compliment your rhyme? Do you have a messenger program? For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Magnus, I would love to try, but don't know if I'd be up to your quality of poetry.You by far outshine my own.Let me know. Peaches |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx to all for the responses.... I will contact you over the nex couple of days... Yes, I have a messenger service...Look in my profile... Thank You for your inputs...This will be fun... If you want to send 2, 3 or 4 stanzas to my email addy...that is fine... I will work with them..And it doesn't have to be rhyme or free verse...your choice.. Thanx Mag. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Magnus, I would duel err duet with you. But you have to start me off... I am a slow starter. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Kethry...I will give you some ammo to work with in a day or two.. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Me too, Barry. Let me know if you have an idea, I would love to try. Hey if its not good, we don't have to post it, right??? Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra....sounds like a deal...Send me three stanzas to my email addy...and I will work with them... You seem to use rhyme well.. so that will work for me...and it won't be a bad one...that I am sure of... Barry (don't feel you have to rush it) |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ohh..and I know of a place where else people will be very willing to write duets with you right now, Sir. For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
sounds like i'm late.... you have others.... *sigh*... somehow this is a great metaphor... .LOL!!! but i'm here if you need another partner.. *grin* i can't believe i'm saying this again.... hehe... i crack myself up |
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