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A Knock Upon Thy Door (Duet With a muse)
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A Knock Upon Thy Door (Duet With a muse) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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.Good Sire, may thy future dreams appear in write, my Sire! for assuredly I hear thy word in all of splendor splendidly splayed before thy knock, I hear, upon my chamber door... Fair maid, doth thou know mine heart lies before.. Before thy feet, for I, thou servant art thine. Wilt whispered words fall deaf, wilt thee ignore or doth thy own heart beat purest with mine. Good Sire, rejoice! for verily you wend this token brought by penning, making me amend my way of thought, my choice of heart and cause a blushing, rushing of depart... Aye Lass, thy blood doth flow strong with flush For words penned doth bring forth thine blush. Mine own heart flutters for thy burning kiss. Shalt we spark thy flame, for thou art missed. [This message has been edited by Magnus (02-03-2002 08:48 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A wonderful merging of poetic thoughts, Magnus...well done! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy Oh my stars how utterly utterly wonderful is this piece from you. Again the flow is amazing, as smooth as silk over skin I love it I really really do. You are an outstandingly good writer, please continue to shine your poetic light here on these pages. This place needs all the quality it can get, and YOU darling boy are quality   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karilea....thank you.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy, you never run out of adjectives... You amaze me..thanx.. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Magnus, so you found someone to write with you, your muse....well you both did terrific. This is very touching. I love it. floria Floria |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* stunning....oh gosh how I love the way the two of you flowed with such perfection together...I love this poem...I can't wait to see more. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Mmmmmmmm...our Modern Shakespeare quills yet another classic from his golden pen! (big hugggssssss) I love it, sweet friend, your writing has improved as always on so many lovely levels, this is wonderful! We all love you so much!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Very beautiful! Good job Mangus! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I think this is my favorite by you so far It's just lovely.Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You have truly outdone yourself with this one, Barry. You and your muse write very well together.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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