What do you think of this?

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Z
New Member

since 2002-02-03

Posts 2

0 posted 2002-02-03 09:04 AM

I was looking for some suggestions maybe. I tried to remember some of the styles I learned in highschool hehe.

I like the way
we are together now.
No need to say
what I feel right now.

You're in my mind,
shaped to my image.
A girl so kind.
A beautiful image.

Who you really are,
worse or better,
My friend you are
and that's what matters.

To me you'll always be,
a friend I like to see.
Friends I love to be.
Is there more to you and me?

[This message has been edited by Z (02-03-2002 09:04 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-02-03 09:15 AM

I like it well enough to Welcome you to Passions! Stay awhile, look around, lots of things to read, many to learn from, and bring in more of your work! While you're at it, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-02-03 09:21 AM

Very nice first post! Take a look around, read others, comment on their work, post some more, and enjoy! I'm sure you will love it here.
Welcome to Passions!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2002-02-03 09:34 AM

This is a very lovely, tender, introspective piece. I enjoyed reading it... Welcome to Passions - I'm sure you're going to love it here...

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2002-02-03 10:58 AM

aww I think this is very sincere!! Welcome to our humble home! I hope you love it here.

looking forward to more,

RP

Z
New Member

since 2002-02-03

Posts 2

5 posted 2002-02-03 11:16 AM

it's for a valentine's card to a very special girl

Hope she likes it.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2002-02-03 11:23 AM

I am sure she will love it...This poem is a delightful start to you here...Welcome to passions...I hope your valentine day will be magical...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-02-03 11:37 AM

YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, what a gorgeous debut from your loving heart! I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!