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Super Sunday |
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craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123
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I could see from the jeans- only outfit and lewd licks on the longneck that half time entertainment was planned, but could never have predicted that third down play on your second half. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
craig, I think this is a bit too deep for me...or maybe I'm too tired, but it seems your second innings was better than your first. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123 |
It will all be good I'm sure. thanks. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Is this baseball talk? LOL |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles) Yeah, is this baseball talk? (smiles) Sooooooo cleverly said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* it sounds like half time is football to me...anyway I don't know how you managed to put a sensual feel into this poem but somehow I picked it up...I love it...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Craig, how do you do this? I mean, how to you make even football sound sensual? I didn't understand it....but I know I enjoyed it!  ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i just got back from the grocery store and the lines were sooooo long with people buying food for the super bowl...im not really a football fan but i wish the Eagles would have won last week...as i grew up not far from Philly.. ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Its Superbowl Sunday...the day that men sit in front of the TV and think they can control the game with the remote, while they make loud animal noises.....  Sorry for the sexist remark...but those are the Superbowl Sundays I am used to. Nice poem! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Heh...Great Poem! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Sounds like the best kind of "half time" entertainment to me! Love your use of innuendos sir! |
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