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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2002-02-02 10:05 AM


-splish splash-
the water
-splish splash-
the water

watch it go up and DOWN

but still...

there's nothing to do
about the drain that goes

GLUG

after all,
Mommy said

"Bath time's over"


[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (02-02-2002 04:38 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-02 11:03 AM


Hey Walt, enjoying the kids, hm? They are too cute in the bath.
Sandra

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2 posted 2002-02-02 03:06 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo adorable, sweet friend, I couldn't blame them, for I would just love to stay and sit around in the bubble bath with my rubber ducky all day long! (giggles in delight) I love this, sweet friend, this is soooooo cute, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


Tiersdin
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3 posted 2002-02-02 03:12 PM


This reminds me of my five year old. I still have to "pull the plug" to get him out of the bath!

cute!

~Tier


sodpossom
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4 posted 2002-02-02 03:47 PM


I have to pull my 2 year olds ear to get him in the tub.Very enjoyable read!
wayoutwalt
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5 posted 2002-02-02 04:46 PM


I preciate the wirds...its apoem about life with its ups and downs and fate pullin the pkug when you aint ready to get outta the tub yuh
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6 posted 2002-02-02 11:46 PM


Yup..staying in the water til ya skin gets pruned. Sounds like fun..and at least you know you've chosen to get out when ya want. Cute way of making a statement, Walt.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

amigo
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7 posted 2002-02-02 11:58 PM


great wirds hiya, waltah...thanx fur shaying...
peaches73533
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8 posted 2002-02-03 12:10 PM


What a wonderful way to make a statement.Thanks for sharing.
peaches

wayoutwalt
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9 posted 2002-02-03 12:16 PM



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