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RosePetal
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0 posted 2002-02-01 09:03 PM


*I'm allright everyone, this was written a while ago. everything's cool, dont let me worry you

Annoying Nurses
Waking me every hour
Nasty plate of food
Not appetizing at all
Cold air blowing past dull walls

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (02-01-2002 09:09 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-01 09:06 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Joanna, I know just how you feel; I have been to the hospital before overnight and it too really scares me to be by myself and the experiences I have to go through like this in silence! (kiss on lips) I love you so much, sweet friend, I'm so happy you're home now, for I love you sooooooooo much! You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-01 09:07 PM


Joanna, HI, I do hope you are ok.. I know what you speak of, been there, done that. Yukkk....hope everything is ok. here is a big get well (((hug)))...floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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3 posted 2002-02-01 09:19 PM


Gee Joanna, I don't like to hear of you ever being in the hospital.  Glad this was written some time ago and all is well.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

ecrivan
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4 posted 2002-02-01 09:20 PM


I'd hate to lie in a sterile drafty hospital
corridor glad you're well..stay well please!


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5 posted 2002-02-01 09:28 PM


the hospital is one place nobody can rest in ha..just when you fall asleep they wake you up..

                 ~Vic

Kethry
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6 posted 2002-02-01 09:44 PM


RP,
Been there done that...I have the emotional scars to prove it.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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7 posted 2002-02-01 10:33 PM


I know just what you mean. I had to go home to get well!
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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-02-01 11:31 PM


I'm so glad you're okay, Joanna...hospitals are indeed, nasty places!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

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9 posted 2002-02-01 11:33 PM


Rose Petal,
Yeah...but I get even. I'm the worst patient!

Startime
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10 posted 2002-02-01 11:45 PM


*whew* I am so glad you carified that...I was about to go into panic....You stay out of those hospitals, you hear...we all need you right here on these blue pages...not prancing around in blue hospital gowns...**big hugs** besides those gowns are really drafty...could give a person a cold from the chill.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (02-01-2002 11:46 PM).]

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