Open Poetry #18 |
One Single Tear Falls |
peaches New Member
since 2002-01-28
Posts 6 |
Statuesque in the harbor on a glorious day As always arms open to show us the way, Symbolizing our country abd everything good Welcomes all to her city of true brotherhood It's too early to tell what this day will bring Her mere presence a promise that freedom will ring, She scans her great city to see all is right Like a hovering mother, such a beautiful sight Then suddenly she sees from the corner of her eye Two great balls of fire explode in the sky, She just can't beleive it the impacts profound Her towering twin brothers now melt to the ground All alone in the harbor to witness this deed One single tear falls for her city in need, She regains her composure and til dawn's early light She'll embrace her great city and burn brighter each night |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very heartfelt, peaches, very well done. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice Peaches, a great tribute. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Sooooooo sad but wonderfully written, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all these victims of the tragedy and I pray the rain can wash all these tears away and have them shine with hope and faith to hold our loved ones dear and to bring promise of justice and freedom for all! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Peaches, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ah! peaches...lest we forget. You are here to remind us. *soft sigh* for the memory. Write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Peaches...we will never forget that moment of our history when our lives changed so dramatically....That day has affected us all tremendously...then, now and for many years to come...But we are a stronger nation now. From the ruins will come a greater nation. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
very good write! We have become stronger than ever after the tragedy! |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Very profound words and a great tribute. Peaches |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
peaches - sad words to be said, but said so well. A tribute to the fallen... BC |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i weep....... nothing will ever be the same.... beautifully written |
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