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Always Wrong |
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the_NoMan New Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 6It is of no significance. |
 Generally, I think its bad taste to absoloutely love a certain piece of your own work, but this one, I love. The waves, caressing, as they beat against the shore, Constant and rythmic, always there forevermore, Touch and love the sandy shores. Reliant, always steady, always ready, always standing, Shores and waves, waves upon the shore, always constant, Loving each other forever more. In reality, what is not seen, the shore holds the waves, Just as the waves hold back the shore, Constantly struggling, forever more. You shant understand the warmth of a lovers heart lest you have felt the chill of anothers. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice...a very truthful poem... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I think its great when one can love their own work..only a few times have i had that feeling..Welcome to Passions ~Vic |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is an interesting perspective. Give and take, holding while rejecting...as in some of the many different faces of human relationships. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Rythmic...gently rocking... nice... ~Tier |
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