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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-02-01 03:09 PM

Let’s Dance

you are
my very breath
melody my heart
dances with
rhymed steps
in reality
that once
were myth
music of you
plays in my head
and I feel you
in the beat of my heart
it is the sweetest song
I’ve ever heard
when love takes
the leading part
as we now
take new steps
in this
our dance
we shall glide
so gracefully
into the waltz
of romance

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-02-01 04:13 PM

1slick_lady,
oh this was so soft and romantic.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2002-02-01 07:11 PM

this is very nice.... it's so wierd, I just wrote one on the topic of dancing and romance
LOL.... you and I we have this thing going on LOL : )

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

3 posted 2002-02-01 07:15 PM

Yep, I, too just wrote a poem entitled, Let's dance. It's a very wonderful thing to do and think about. I enjoyed your poem.

-newel

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-01 07:32 PM

(sigh) This is sooooooo lovely, sweet friend, it brings great joy to my heart to feel your happiness of true love in your gorgeous words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you forever dance to the two-step of eternity! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-02-01 11:46 PM

helen - your writing with grace, soft as you do. I love to dance, especially to the blues...

BC

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2002-02-01 11:48 PM

*sigh* Your words dance as they embrace the man you love. Well done...Beautiful. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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