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poeticdreamer
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since 2002-01-17
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0 posted 2002-01-31 10:26 PM


Cradled in love's infinity:

As spirit enters heaven,

Never going back,

Never any need to,

Entire Earth time history,

Only a fluttered blink,

In this new existence,

Forever now is reality,

Ignorance not existing here,

Wisdom a new friend,

Happiness is now eternal,

Loneliness a banished stranger,

Held in His arms,

With missed loved ones,

Never to be seperated,

Again.


© Copyright 2002 poeticdreamer - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2002-01-31 10:34 PM


poeticdreamer - phew, this is really good, really good. I like it very much. Great write you have done....

BC

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-01-31 10:43 PM


Yes poetic, it seems it is much better there than here. I know this is for your cousin and it is beautiful. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

RosePetal
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3 posted 2002-01-31 11:31 PM


oh yes, I love the ending! this is good work!!
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-01-31 11:40 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it!!! (big hugggssssss) Such hope and reunion fills tehse words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
5 posted 2002-02-01 04:00 PM


this flowed.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
6 posted 2002-02-01 11:59 PM


*big hugs** MAGNIFICENT...I love it. *big hugs*

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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