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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-02-01 02:32 PM


oh how wonderful
this breathing in of freedom
cleanest air of all
yet bought with a price so dear
remembering with each breath

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-01 02:35 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Ooohhhhhhh...I know just how you feel, it is the most wonderful feeling to be free in imagination and to express ourselves for how we feel! (smiles) Your words always make me smile, sweet friend, you truly are our wonderful Doctor Of Love and Friendship, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-01 02:42 PM


Yes, indeed. Freedom always comes with a heavy price! Fruit must fall to the earth and die, in order that new generations of life can freely grow new blossoms to bear new fruit. And must not we all die to become totally free? As we rise freely in God, in eternity?
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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with you
3 posted 2002-02-01 02:44 PM


this is wonderful!!!
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4 posted 2002-02-01 04:17 PM


The price of the air we breathe, a unique look at freedom.

Well done and thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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5 posted 2002-02-01 04:23 PM


yes we should all inhale that beautiful air and be thankful..

              ~Victoria~

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6 posted 2002-02-01 04:36 PM


Well said,  very well said..
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7 posted 2002-02-01 04:42 PM


So true. Yet I am frustrated with so many things that are happening in this "free" coutry. I know, not a popular opinion. Can't help it.
Love the poem though, and we do need to appreciate what good things we have in this country. And how many people have died for it.
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-02-01 04:53 PM


beautiful interloper.....simply beautiful!!!!

Charisma

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9 posted 2002-02-01 05:11 PM


Naturally good.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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10 posted 2002-02-01 08:45 PM


beautifully summed up in a few lines
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11 posted 2002-02-01 09:11 PM



'Lest we Forget...

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12 posted 2002-02-01 09:13 PM


The air we breath, thank God that is still free, since some are paying for bottled water. LOL...great write. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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13 posted 2002-02-02 01:09 AM


I Love it!! As i said in another post, my dad was killed in a war when I was six. My entire family has paid the price

Dance like noone is watching
Sing like noone is listening
Love like you'll never be hurt
Live like its Heaven on earth

HUGS AND KISSES TO ALL!!!

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