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Touched by a Kiss |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Ocean eyes of blue violet touch deeply within like a wave basking in depths of moonlight The pure velvet of his kiss lingers upon succulent lips like the blush of a mandarin sunset in the afternoon She savors each kiss like bouquet of red wine holding them close to her soul til she sets them adrift in memoirs of the wind like a taffeta ribbon draped around the wounds of her bleeding heart You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
in memoirs of the wind like a taffeta ribbon draped around the wounds of her bleeding heart ..... that was exquisite... greatly enjoyed your poem, Victoria... Regards, sudhir |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Vic, your soft gentle words flow like pure honey, sweetly, smoothly, slowly, gently, tantalizingly into my galatic pool of celestial ecstasy. I'm falling in love. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Victoria "She savors each kiss like bouquet of red wine" You have wonderful words inside you. floria Floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
An awesomely beautiful poem, Victoria. I especially loved these words The pure velvet of his kiss lingers upon succulent lips like the blush of a mandarin sunset in the afternoon such creative imagery!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love the mandarin sunset and ribbons you weave in your words, this is wonderful! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a true enchantress of words and imagery, I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* so beautiful so tender such memories of the soft love of his kiss and then one comes to the end to learn how the sweetness of memories covers a bleeding heart....*sigh* is it better to have love and maybe the pain that may go with it or is it better to be alone with no one to share the little things of life with? **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
sudhir lyer..thank you so much..appreciate you kind comments newell...thank you..well i do talk slow in real ha..very easy going person ha floria..oh thank you dear one madame..thank you for peeking in dear lady noah.. thank you sweet onekaren..they say better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all..im sure whoever it was is right ..i think ha..thanks hon |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
to be loved and remembered as a day dream you write lovely words ms V |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Victoria,beautiful love poem.   Juanita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"holding them close to her soul til she sets them adrift in memoirs of the wind like a taffeta ribbon draped around the wounds of her bleeding heart" Victoria~THIS is awesome! And...I'm keeping it! ~Hugs and smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you DS..love it when you peek in  juanita..thank you so much hugss nancy..glad you enjoyed hon ..hugss |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely writing...James |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Victoria, A great write from a fine poet Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh Vic...the Valentina of Pip who writes superb poems of love....This one is especially nice... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
james thank you for peeking in.. hugs daniel..thank you so much..nice to hear from you again.. barry..thank you very much..i think i like that name ha.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - words of gentleness, and words of sorrow. Combined them well... BC |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
"She savors each kiss like bouquet of red wine" What a pretty thought! You've done good V! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you bill ..so nice to hear from you tonight.. thank you joanna..thank you very much..for peeking in.. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Victoria, this is too stunning for words. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Victoria This poem is such a pure example of the flowing beauty of poetic language. Poetry in it's most gracious yet intense portrait of emotion! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Your words never fail to touch! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
dee..thank you for taking time to read.. ethome..thank you so much i do appreciate those very kind words.. eddie..thank you..always nice to hear from you eddie |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Victoria, Those are powerful kisses. I like that! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Larry.. ~Victoria~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ I thought I had replied to this....  Its most lovely.... Lauren~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you so much my friend...glad you enjoyed.. |
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