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A Vessel in the Night
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A Vessel in the Night |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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*written with my friend greymouser* Although this vessel has by time been age and is no longer supple, soft and smooth it's loving contents is a beverage to give to those who see it's worth to sooth but now it starts to drip from seam and stem and try it's very best to stop the flows this vessel might not be an opaque gem but proudly sails its mast and glows hull of courage and will carries on sometimes riding waves of despair never does this compass steer wrong alone in the darkness and cold night air Is one short sip to taste so much to ask? To anchor within prides harbor and bask You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. -Ziggy [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-02-2002 10:04 AM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Beautiful! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Victoria, this painted visions of a loving cup for me. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sometimes I feel as though I am that vessel.. Now to just find that harbor you are talking about...Nice write Victoria...another one.. as usual.. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Like this a lot. I think you two write well together. Sandra |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ LOVELY my friend....Indeed well written....  Lauren~ Step through the |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely write Victoria, enjoyed so much! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yes, yes, our destinies are all like vessels rocking on the seas of passion, and even in the coldest winters and the rough icebergs and hurricanes we may come across, He will always show us the way with His astrolabe of faith and with His breath will guide our vessels in a heavenly wind! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
newell..thank you again..for you support kethry..thank you so much..for peeking in hugss barry..we both thank you..actually greymouser was the one who came up with this one....you will have to ask him where it is haa..just stick your head in the porthole and ask him ha.. sandra..mike is a very good writer..he should write more..thank you sandra from both of us.. thank you lauren...we both thank you very much for your nice comments nancy..thank you ...for peeking in tonight hugsnoah..yes you are so right dear one hugss madame..oh i love the ship..thank you for reading as always hugs[This message has been edited by Victoria (02-01-2002 08:10 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful poem, Victoria...I sure hope that you have smooth sailing ahead and that you reach a safe harbor.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Lovely images here Victoria and so very much enjoyed. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I hope you have smooth waters ahead.I enjoyed this. peaches |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you sue..nice to hear from you again..and mike thanks you too peaches...i use to go to high school with a girl named peaches..thank you for peeking in |
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