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in-between in being |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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an absolute dreamlike bliss felt in the within of kisses shared between lovers is so clearly evident by an synchronized urge to breathe in rushed gasps of air in the in-between moments of ever reincarnating love something that happens in the in-between of all the things is placed like some local cheese between slices of foreign bread it’s all about treading the thin line at least that’s what they say and all i do is sit amongst in the in-between of their wisdom neither black nor white a delicate balance of brown neither left or right like an eye of the epicentre in all the white shades of black and all the black shades of white in all the grey shades of the day and all the colours of the night neither the void, nor the complete i feel so united yet discrete just ever so perfectly, in between i feel so within and yet without reading in between the lines feeling those white spaces hearing in between the music enjoying the rests of silence harmony and symphony in the in-betweens of life makes me marvel at the in-between moments of usual and the astonish of addition and deletion of and not of … --------------------------- Most people I know are caught in the fluid state of in-betweenness, engulfed by the flow of life - which after all maybe a river of dreams, where there are more than two banks (near side and far side). What then, if you are caught in the rapids, in the exact epicentrical eye of the current.... neither side is particularly near or far. This just goes to say that nothing is two dimensional except maybe the coldness of humans to other beings (humans or otherwise); the concept of us and them is so terribly inappropriate, isn't it? Maybe, I am completely clouded and living in that blurred area of incorrectness.... Well, just thinking aloud.... thanks a lot for coming by... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sudhir, I find your philsophy most interesting. I do often feel kind of in between everything. It's an odd feeling. I also wonder are dreams life, and life dreams? And how would we ever know? Enjoyed the poem, lots. Sandra [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (01-31-2002 06:17 PM).] |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Sudhir,I like your description on life.Sometimes I don`t know if I coming or going.    Juanita |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Doesn't it show the need for a fine balance in this 'complicated' life?...i guess there are always two sides to a coin, and from this clouded & blurred state only (i don't call it incorrectness), clarity evolves ... interesting write here, Sudhir...liked it...  |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sudhir, the very nature of being alive is that we are always in motion as we travel between extremes. As we live, we are all always between these extremes. Only death has certainty of position. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) WOW!!! Oh my gosh, your philosophy always makes me smile, sweet friend, there is always harmony and hope in-between everything, and may we always look deep in our hearts and find our melody of joy! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderfully delightful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I will stop by anytime I see your name Sudhir, I love your philosophy and your interesting writes. floria Floria |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
As always, you seem to have caught me in an in-between moment, attending to day-to-day mundane needs, while my mind is flying outside in the stars. Your poetry always stimulates deeper thinking. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Many heartfelt thanks to you all... your kind visits and kind responses are much appreciated... Regards, Sudhir |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Some great food for thought in this Sudhir! Well written my friend....makes me wonder sometimes, this crazy life! You sure haven't lost your touch! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, gentle, gentle ramblings, my poet-friend...and I would read more, soon, please.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sudhir~I enjoyed the write and your thoughts....much to think about here.... what is real and what is just an illusion. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all very, very much... my dear friends... Regards, sudhir |
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