Open Poetry #18 |
Written For You |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“WRITTEN FOR YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Enchanted by your beauty, I touch your elegant face… Fragile you are inside, tender must be my embrace… Eyes sparkle, yet with a tear, a tender kiss to send away… Your pain I know, I take, my caress is your bouquet… Warm, a most charming smile, soft my fingers to your lips… Then mine to meet yours, my hands placed on your hips… A love poem from my heart, waiting to grow anew… These words from within, only written for you… ~~~~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Whew, Bill...you're teaching me a thing, or two. Passionate, intense, exact. I stand in awe! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Such tender words for the one you write of. In my heart of hearts I don't think their is a nicer gift that one can offer. There's something about the giving of what can't be bought! Lovely poem BC~ |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
wow who ever this is for she will like it great write bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill~ You are romantically-versed~ This is lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
If these were words written only for me..how special I would feel. Yes, you are always the romantic one...always ~Wynter |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is the most beautiful kind of love poem a woman could ever ask for, I just know she'll love this forever as she'll always love you! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet freind, this is sooooooo delightful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely Mr. Charles.. .enjoyed your words ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very romantic and well done! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sounds like you have found a lady to write from your heart to....she is very lucky to have the tender touch of a man as gentle as you are....I am so glad you have love filling your life and heart again...you are very deserving of feeling the tenderness of love. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
beautifully written and so evocative of the romance that you hold... deep inside... regards, sudhir |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill~Have to tell you quickly before the power goes out again from the ice on the lines that this is an extemely beautiful and romantic write my firend. Of course I would love to believe it was meant for me, along with dozens of other women out here. Hugs. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy WOW this is utterly utterly superb. As soft and romantic as the breeze that wafts across the bay as twilight summons it’s stars and the day fades slowly into night. This is utterly gorgeous I love it love it love it. You are a supremely good writer, consistently writing pure jewels to be treasured. This however is above that, it shines with clarity in a world sparkling with delight. It is utterly first class Do I love it? ……… I don’t just love it I really LOVE IT, well done my friend don’t stop Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Bill, this has the nicest lyrical quality to it. What a beauitiful love poem. Sandra |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Beautiful Bill, simply beautiful. nice flow. floria Floria |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* your pen pours romantic and reach out to loving souls. Love it very much! Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Thank you for sharing this with us. She is one lucky gal Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"only written for you…" breath taking...helen |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Perfect Valentine's poem for the one you love. Truly a beautiful and heart-felt poem. Wonderful writing, Bill!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Bill,so romantic and it sure sounds like love. Juanita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
And who else would they be written for? Flowingly perfect. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
awwwww why can't these florida men be more like YOU?! so passionate! RP |
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