Open Poetry #18 |
Butterfly Heart |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Butterfly Heart I must have a butterfly heart for I feel it flutter when we greet and part with this excitement it spreads its wings I can’t control the behavior it brings free fall floating and dancing around gliding between a pounding sound quivers and frolics moves soft as a wink my heart and a butterfly have a magical link "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your loving heart flutters like a butterfly in this glorious poem, as you are always a butterfly to us all, flittering with friendship and delight! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - your heart is a butterfly heart, with all of its softness... love this one... BC |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Helen, this is beautiful. I dearly love butterflies. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sounds like the magical link you have is love...this is soft and very beautiful...you wear the heart and tender wings of a butterfly perfectly. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Helen, this is a beautiful and loving Poem. I hope that your words reflect your feelings. For the feelings are certainly wonderful. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - I know that I have replied to this already. But I read it again, and like it so much, I replied once again... BC |
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leafseranade Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 118Wisconsin, USA |
how lovely is this? very. i enjoyed this so much! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Helen, this is the most beautiful poem that you have ever written! This gem is a keeper! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is beautiful..... i think it is one of my favorites : ) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I remember the feeling..brings back high school memories of a guy named Gary..if he only new haa...enjoyed ~Victoria~ |
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