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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-01-30 11:51 PM

Color The Edge

there is
an edge
I’ve come
close to
and I’m
not afraid now
because
of you
there are
no boundaries
where before
I colored between
the hues
I’m mixing
the world
has never seen
I see
beautiful pictures
that come
in all kinds
for you
have taught me
to color
outside the lines

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved

SEA

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Member Seraphic

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Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-01-30 11:55 PM

"for you
have taught me
to color
outside the lines"

I love this

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2002-01-31 12:07 PM

I agree with SEA.....

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2002-01-31 12:10 PM

sea...thank you...you say the nicest things...helen

Z...i have wanted to contact you to say ty so many times but you have no e mail...helen

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

4 posted 2002-01-31 12:17 PM

Very intriguing poem...from the wording and the structure. I really enjoyed reading this.

***Ivy Rose

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2002-01-31 01:05 AM

Damn the lines. This is most valuable.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-01-31 01:48 AM

helen - wonderful to break the line and to see the color on the other side.

BC

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7 posted 2002-01-31 02:09 AM

OneSlickLady~
VERY well penned~
The thoughts so well-conceived ...
the presentation flowing~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2002-02-05 03:30 AM

1slick_lady-
   This likes me VERY much!
   Love the whole concept of this...much enjoyed.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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