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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-01-30 02:45 PM

You do....yes...I know that...always have
Will I always remember, never once forget?
I hope not...

Will you love me when the flowers die
and the autumn of my life does now fly?
When all that I am is just a common man
just doing those things felt that I can.

I give you all that my heart does carry
I will not dilly dally, nor will I tarry.
I will stand at the gate of your heart
waiting to catch it, if ever torn apart.

You know I am a part of your day
and that I simply won’t flitter away.
That each moment I share with you
are treasures of us, gems of blue.

Eyes that gleam and glisten so pure
Love boundless through time endure.
Lasting bond born of kinship so deep
Holding you tenderly as your asleep.

I wish to carry those thought until
Until the twelfth of morrow I will.
Your bond shall remain within me
for I will love you, always faithfully.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-01-30 02:48 PM

Magnus, thank you for this. My first thought of this is of two people who, for reasons they could not control, could never be as one, with the exception of that part of them in their souls, where they are always united...

and this is just that verbalization that neither one has never forgotten what once was...

Thank you!

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

2 posted 2002-01-30 02:48 PM

Very beautiful!

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-30 03:05 PM

(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, the words you write are always blue diamonds to us all! (smiles) May your love forever be boundless and harmonious, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is an excellent poem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-01-30 03:59 PM

Karilea...thank you...actually, I was
remembering all of the days when Lou and I
were separated by my deployments....Lots
of feelings abounded during those days...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-01-30 04:00 PM

Newell...thank you..appreciate your reply.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-01-30 04:01 PM

Noah...ditto to you my fine young man..Thank
You...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2002-01-30 04:13 PM

Forever faithful
promises not always kept
but I believe you

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (01-30-2002 04:15 PM).]

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-01-30 04:25 PM

Interloper...No...promises weren't always
kept...But we have endured...Thanx...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-01-30 04:52 PM

Barry~Very well penned. So pleased your puter seems to be better today!

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-01-30 05:07 PM

Nancy...thanx...yes, me too...Yesterday was
very frustrating..not being able to post..

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2002-01-30 05:09 PM

enjoy

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

12 posted 2002-01-30 05:14 PM

"That each moment I share with you
are treasures of us, gems of blue."
I think you will never run out of beautiful romantic loving words Magnus, so nice this is. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

13 posted 2002-01-30 05:17 PM

Hello Barry

You have described the finest love through your wonderful tapestry of words and the picture you painted was beautiful.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

14 posted 2002-01-30 06:11 PM

*sigh* I love the honesty within your poetry...you tell about what your heart feels and then tell us that as in real life you and Lou have had your struggles...Beautiful...I am sure this poem brought tears of tender love to her eyes..**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

15 posted 2002-01-30 06:16 PM

This is hauntingly beautiful, Barry.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

16 posted 2002-01-30 06:24 PM

Simply Beautiful my friend!!

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

17 posted 2002-01-31 02:31 AM

Magnus - I almost missed this one. Your devotion and love to your special one is what I read from these you do. I like them..

BC

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

18 posted 2002-02-05 03:35 AM

Magnus-
   What lovely thoughts you've penned here.
   Very well-written, my friend.
   I enjoyed this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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