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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2002-01-30 09:30 PM


Ever once felt you were out of a book,
Ever once felt you starred in some movie,
Because since I've known you nothing is fairytale,
And the day since I met you the story began,

Can you ever begin to belive in fairytales,
Because if you belive you belive in me,

I know now that you are a good friend,
And I know that you'll always understand,
When I need you your there with helping hand,
And I always be there with an helping hand for you,

Can you ever begin to belive in fairytales,
Becsuse if you belive you belive in me,

Now I'm lonely because I miss you,
Not because I can't wait to see what you say,
Or tell me how was your day even tho I love to,
But because I'm lonely when I'm not in your arms,

Can you ever begin to belive in fairytales,
Can you ever make me believe in them again.

Write what you feel, feel what you wrtie.


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1 posted 2002-01-30 09:34 PM


I hope he believes! It would be nice to have a fairytale romance!

RP

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2 posted 2002-01-30 09:37 PM


Thanks rosepetals I hope so too

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3 posted 2002-01-30 09:54 PM


Sad.... but very nice.... You Keep Believing in Yourself.... Thats what matters!!!!!!
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4 posted 2002-01-30 10:01 PM


Zinesser - Thanks and I will believe in myself, its just nice to have someone to believe in you.

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5 posted 2002-01-30 10:01 PM


Very nice write Moon Dust.  I enjoyed this one tonight.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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6 posted 2002-01-30 10:04 PM


Nancy - Thank you, glad you enjoyed

Write what you feel, feel what you wrtie.


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7 posted 2002-01-30 10:15 PM


Sometimes I wonder if I am the only one who believes. But this makes me think not. Lovely.
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-01-30 10:22 PM


Yeah I thought so too sandra and thank u for reading.

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