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Open Poetry #18

Living Well

jennirey
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 198
North Richland HillsTx

0 posted 2002-01-30 10:14 PM

I’m Living and I’m living well,
Since you released me from my shell.
My aurelia of sorrow had recessed me in,
Alone I was ruined, with vain expectation
Smile Maker You capture My heart,
Melt all the sadness from my heart.
You exhale my dandelion wishes
and scatter them to the wind,
rebirth is now imminent.
How great it is to call you My friend.
To know you is grand, To Love you divine,
To know that your heart is solely mine.
No more sadness, No more tears.
I pledge you this, For all our years.
Smile Maker I love you so,
I now know which way to go.

jennirey
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 198
North Richland HillsTx

1 posted 2002-01-30 10:16 PM

P.S. This is a repost (after carefull changes) thank you to cwebb for the critique.
Jen

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

2 posted 2002-01-30 10:18 PM

Its so nice to have a friend like that and better still a lover. I like this one so much its going in me library.

Write what you feel, feel what you wrtie.

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

3 posted 2002-01-30 10:19 PM

ooops forgot to put in library

Write what you feel, feel what you wrtie.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2002-01-30 10:26 PM

I like how you referred to this person you write of as the 'smile maker"
I do believe it is the little things that mean the most.

Like a smile, they are so easy to give.
Nicely done~

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