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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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Who are you? my ego penetrated? a disembodied id? like a tide sometimes rolling up my shore you are and yet you are not I walk a lonely beach Are you there? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Krawdad..there are layers in this...you could be talking to another person, but I think you're talking to yourself. Interesting, either way. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Hi Martie, It was talking to someone else, and it still is, but in my penchant for minimizing, I removed one word and it turned. Fascinating how that works. Thanks for stoping by. e |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I know that beach for sometimes I too walk it in loneliness. You have said so much in just a few words. Well done. I love it. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I like this...very interesting. Mind if I ponder it for a bit? Thank you.... ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Such yearning fills these words, sweet friend, I hope now love has found your heart and now you walk happily on the shores of your heart with joy! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is so well-said! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krawdad, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A short-lived relationship, fleeting and as transitory as a mayfly? Or a short concise poetic thought. Interesting title and train of thought here. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
e...so great to see you here...you inspired me...hope you dont mind...h |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
A lonely beach, a simple question. Not so simple, really. I like it. Nan |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Well done! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
if only briefly, you will have left your imprint... ~Wynter |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
beats me, i'm still trying to figure it out. yeah, me, too. yep. i'm right here.  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Krawdad, you really touch deep feelings with your write. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
I'M HERE I'M HERE! teehee..walk not alone on that there beach my friend i know i love this...explaining how i understand it is another story...! always good to see you friend!! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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