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I Would Tell Him
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I Would Tell Him |
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Ladyhawke Member
since 2001-09-01
Posts 86 |
If he were to listen, I would tell him I know the depth Is infinite behind The words. If he once dared look Into my eyes I would tell him All those words, The hundreds and Thousands from Billions of the pool He chooses And the combinations Thereof, Whether cast in anger, Fear, love, doubt, Sorrow or joy, Only reveal and do Not hide What his soul Is made of. If he were here, I would tell him... But he may already know Of the love that beats Within and reaches Through, beyond my heart, To what lies beyond The printed lines. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I am glad he knows....saying it over and over in a million different ways will fill his heart with the joy of hearing it. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I hope very soon you will meet your love and you can share him all your heart desires to declare to him! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ladyhawke darling girl I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly dreamy a fabulous little write with layers of meaning again. YOUR writing lately is superb darling girl just superb I love the depth of this the shades of it’s meanings, truly wonderful writing Tell him always you can never say the words often enough Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Ladyhawke Member
since 2001-09-01
Posts 86 |
Thank you, Startime, Mistletoe and Marsha. I always appreciate it when people take the time to read and to reply. And Marsha, thank you for your encouraging comments. I hope to improve with time and experience. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I just did a poem about words that do not work as well as his obviously do. This is a loving and well done poem. Sandra |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
This is lovely. How could he not know of your love? That kind of emotion is impossible to conceal. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyHawke~ This is so nicely penned~ I just may have to 'borrow' the title for some future 'inspire'... Thank you for sharing~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
awww hell, lady... pick up the darn phone and tell him!! then go on over there and tell him! what the heck? life is short! go ahead! he wants to hear it! hehe... believe me... they all want to hear it!! oh damn.. well, if you don't tell him, could i? *grin (enjoyed your writing very much! it sounds sincere and beautiful!) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyHawke~ I wanted to come back in and say thanks for the 'inspire'~ You may find my piece in Spiritual Forum /pip/Forum25/HTML/003009.html I REALLY appreciate the thoughts that flew to my inkwell~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
as always beautifully penned LadyHawk...and I agree with Doreen....your writing sounds sincere and beautiful! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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