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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Ponder Life, mine in test pattern, chaotic in view, swirls, schemes, unweilding, monotonous, to some. Each day in whittling, turning, shaping, carving a place for me, but feeling stoned, hardened. Inside a gem, seeded, devitalized, unsmoothed, awaiting one's discovery, notice. Perceive a prismed mind, chandeliered, suspended, branches reaching out towards the light, reflect. ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Inside a gem, seeded, devitalized, unsmoothed, awaiting one's discovery, notice Soon...it's in the air. Can you feel it? Forgive me, it's way too early for me to be up, I think I may be hallucinating. lol Most ponderous write, this! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Perceive a prismed mind, chandeliered, suspended, branches reaching out towards the light, reflect."   (sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is my favorite part but I love the whole poem, it reflects with beautiful surreal visions and dreamscapes! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* a diamond in the rough waiting for the gentle touch of a master jeweller to polish you to life again. Stunning...I love it. I know just how you feel. It will take someone very special to bring out the perfect facets of the gem that is your heart. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ 'a prismed mind, chandeliered' Gorgeous originality of thought~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
beautiful thoughts, Maureen, sometimes we just write our hearts out and are better for it, you wake up one day and realize it's all been terrific therapy. At least for me, it has. I liked this one. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a beautiful description of a lovely, feeling person. As for being stoned, uh, well, ah, .... I loved it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - your thoughts were in your heart and your pen with this. Lovely, as you always write... BC |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Simply beautiful Maureen ... wonderful metaphoric imagery throughout. You've captured this perfectly! Best wishes, /Kit |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Duncan...soon? feel it? nope, the past has numbed my senses for now but thanks for trying to make me feel it...whatever it is *s M Noah...glad you found a verse you enjoyed thank you, always Maureen Karen...Oh Karen..I am not sure there is anyone ever again who can do that...I am going to live in reality now..not a world of dreams. Marge... thanks, how are your plans coming along? hugs M Kathleen...not so sure therapy is what one would call it... sometimes I think it is burying oneself in the blues.. hugs M Interloper ..never been stoned..me that is..maybe that is what I have missed in life.. glad you loved it...yes I feel way too much in life.. Thanks..nice to see you back *s where ya been? Bill...thanks, I can't seem to get it right (write) yet... *s M Kit ...I am glad you were pleased with my thoughts the other day *s thank you Maureen |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Maureen- I absolutely LOVE this, my friend. Excellent write! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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