Open Poetry #18 |
Moon Sail Away |
Martie
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Posts 28049California |
Moon Sail Away A celestial glow disturbed the room and in its fade a shadow bloomed as if this light took up some space and beguiled the air with an embrace so I crossed the bedroom’s gloom into the refracted space of moon that grazed the sky in watchful glean and took me to a peaceful dream leaving behind the wilted pillow and moving over the silver willow just a beam of purest pale leaning into dreams a sail then serene in the between to flow with gilded butterfly wing with dust of wishes made today across the trail of milky way Would that I could stay this flight and be a follower of this light though robin song would gather dust against the bushes in cobwebs thrust and my dear heart who still sleeps on would reach out and find me gone so I choose the breaking day and the moon sailing away away the moon sailing away ___ 7-19-2000 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSis~ You've been Luna-ticked ! I love it~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, new to me, hadn't caught this one before, so very glad you brought it back to light, enjoyed the play on words, as "a sail" also came across as assail and the light bright white of the moon can do just that... big smiles here, Martie... |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very pretty! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...such beautiful imagery fills your words, sweet friend, Lady Luna spread sher glitter through every word you write! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is a true dreamy treasure! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
then serene in the between to flow with gilded butterfly wing with dust of wishes made today across the trail of milky way ============================== *sigh* (ps--I havent forgotten about the prose you posted...its been mad crazy here. I cant wait to read it) |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
No one can do this like you can, Martie... Beautiful and perfect poetry! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Nice work, Martie. Enjoyed the imagery very much. *hugs* Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A choice between the sun and the moon... Such a dilemma... and you make it seem so simple... |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I like this, all sad and lyrical at once. |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
Marty, This is so beautiful. I haste to make a copy and share with my friends. Hugs, Joe |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Martie, this is so very nice. floria Floria |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Awwwwwww, this is so cool, I just love the way you write, love it! Joanna |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Your writing is as pretty as you are. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A lovely piece on peace, Martie! Cor |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you never fail to disappoint with your talent for imagery and excellence in writing! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a treasure this was this evening, thank you Martie. The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes. Let the reader |
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