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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-02-04 11:06 PM

FAX ME
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/14/01

Fax me
Your message of affection
You’re so lovely
Send me your feelings of endearment

Fax me
My heart is always on-line
Longing for your love so heavenly sweet
Smiling in your grace, waiting to be mine

Fax me
You are so beautifully precious
Melt my heart in your soft tender kiss, sweetie
Show me your world, as my lips touch yours, passionately luscious

Fax me
All that my heart desires
I want to love you, darling
Hold me as we swim in loves romantic fire

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-04-2002 11:06 PM).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-02-04 11:09 PM

Noah, this is so sweet

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-02-04 11:16 PM

Noah - I hope she sees this and does send you a fax. This poem is so lovely that she shouldn't resist...

BC

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

3 posted 2002-02-04 11:25 PM

Okay Noah...what's your fax number???

....oh, right...you weren't writing this for me were you??? LOL. Seriously, this is pretty, and, I'm sure she will fax you.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

4 posted 2002-02-04 11:30 PM

Beautiful thoughts, sweet Noah. Hope you get lots of FAXes.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2002-02-04 11:53 PM

This is very sweet, creative and passionate

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

6 posted 2002-02-05 01:05 AM

Noah,
My dear sweet friend.You always have a heart so full of love.May you receieve the fax you are waiting for.Muuuuaaaahhhh.
Peaches

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

7 posted 2002-02-05 08:45 AM

Noah - what a romantic plea. Years ago we used to write love letters on paper with a pen; my how times have changed and technology has grown. A fax no less! I truly hope you get what you are looking for. You are such a sweetie-pie romantic. Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

8 posted 2002-02-05 03:21 PM

Noah,

This is very sweet. I liked it alot.

~Laura~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-02-05 03:26 PM

So sweet Noah, but, you didn't give us your fax number! Oh...I'll bet it was for one special person!

Very good write!

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

N orth Carolina Girl
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

10 posted 2002-02-05 03:38 PM

Noah,I bet that fax is on its way to you.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

rebekah33
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 140
MD/NJ

11 posted 2002-02-06 04:11 PM

Noah-

I thought the "fax me" candy heart was so ridiculously dumb until I read your poem and could understand the real emotions behind it

-R.

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

12 posted 2002-02-06 04:26 PM

oohhhhhh u are amazing

love ya bunches swetie

DayDreamer99
Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 72

13 posted 2002-02-06 05:23 PM

lovin the poem..and if the girl your talkin bout doesnt fax you..ima be kickin her butt hehehe *grins devilishly* (i dont think thats a word so..) *grins evily* haha well gtg *hugs n kisses*
Tifferz

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

14 posted 2002-02-06 10:41 PM

Hello Noah

I really enjoyed this one - very clever!

Take care....Sue

Suetang

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

15 posted 2002-02-06 10:47 PM

I don't know about getting a clear image through the fax...but I like how you generated a sense of urgency in this Valentine poem

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

16 posted 2002-02-06 11:18 PM

Sweet Noah~

Indeed very clever, and you are such the romantic....lovely sweet friend....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-06-2002 11:22 PM).]

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

17 posted 2002-02-06 11:34 PM

What a concept Noah - a faxed kiss on the cheek? Only you could come up with a way to get one too! Very creative.

The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes. Let the reader
catch his own breath."
~Elizabeth Clarkson Zwart~

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