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Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2002-01-30 10:58 AM

Tell me true
What would you do
If I dropped more than a dime
And your telephone did chime
When I spoke back to your hello
Would your knees start knocking
And your legs turn to jello
Would you mind be gone
Or would your next word
Set the tone
Would this be our last time on the phone
Or would I be allowed to drop more than a dime
To take up some of your time
Cause you never know
If upon your ID my name might show
What would you do
If it were I who returned your hello
So if I call never ask me
What do you want
Cause I might just tell you

© icyheart

[This message has been edited by Alan (01-30-2002 05:48 PM).]

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

1 posted 2002-01-30 11:02 AM

Very clever and enjoyable!

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

2 posted 2002-01-30 11:12 AM

My words are numerous and I have no problem setting the tone. Soooooooo ... if you called me you would need to be sure to have two pockets full of change.

Fun read Allan

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2002-01-30 11:28 AM

WOW!!!!This poem flows so well and paints such a great vision of you calling her and the smile you put on her face...Very well done, Alan....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-30 04:18 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo sweet, sweet friend, what a pleasant suprise it must have been for her when you called her up! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-01-30 05:26 PM

Icyheart you got your point across in this, nice, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

6 posted 2002-01-30 05:49 PM

Thank you everyone for your comments.

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