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JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2002-01-29 11:13 PM


I have a soft underbelly
easy for vipers to strike
so please go easy on me
cause fangs really hurt me

© Copyright 2002 James Bowie - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-01-29 11:36 PM


awww I won't bite! Maybe just nibble a bit.
cute write

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Gaia
2 posted 2002-01-30 01:08 AM


OK, if you promise not to hurt me when you see I 'borrowed' the title and made it part of a title medley. (Plagiarism)
Nan
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3 posted 2002-01-30 07:07 AM


You're just a big old softie, JB...
Kethry
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4 posted 2002-01-30 07:14 AM


James,
I won't bite...much.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2002-01-30 07:18 AM


*s

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6 posted 2002-01-30 07:16 PM


*smiles* This is cute, JB!
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