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Open Poetry #18

for the critics

JamesBowie
Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2002-01-29 11:13 PM

I have a soft underbelly
easy for vipers to strike
so please go easy on me
cause fangs really hurt me

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-01-29 11:36 PM

awww I won't bite! Maybe just nibble a bit.
cute write

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-01-30 01:08 AM

OK, if you promise not to hurt me when you see I 'borrowed' the title and made it part of a title medley. (Plagiarism)

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2002-01-30 07:07 AM

You're just a big old softie, JB...

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-01-30 07:14 AM

James,
I won't bite...much.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-01-30 07:18 AM

*s

M

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2002-01-30 07:16 PM

*smiles* This is cute, JB!

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