Open Poetry #18 |
The Pond |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I was walking down by the pond, A daily pleasure of which I'm fond, When an acorn caught my eye, Atop a rock; I then did spy, A scampering squirrel, run to the stone, By waters edge, squirrel was alone. Then came a splash, to my surprise, A giant catfish, before my eyes, Snatched squirrel and acorn, clean as can be, In just a instant, it was just me. I turned to go, was still amazed, I wondered if, I might be crazed, Then kersplash, I turned to see, That giant catfish, staring up at me, I must admit, I was in shock, When he placed the acorn, back on the rock. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Woa! That was great! It came all in a flash and a splash and left a big grin on my face. Nan |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Now Tim...I've heard some fish stories..but this one takes the cake (squirrel) I'm going fishing with you, then we can have fish and squirrel stew too. |
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Chrissy Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 81Idaho, no I am not a farmer! |
That was really cute! It totally took me back to running in the early mornings at my cabin! Thanks I needed that Chrissy |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles) Ooohhhhhhh...how delightful, this is such a beautiful fish story! I love it!!! (big hugggsssssss) Cute catfish, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
witty witty always a treasure to read a poem by Tim is always a pleasure |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A close call indeed, Tim! Lucky for you, he was apparently not fond of nuts! Enjoyed! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This reminded me of Moby Dick relocating to a pond and coming back as a catfish!! Wonderfully entertaining~ very cute! |
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Ladyhawke Member
since 2001-09-01
Posts 86 |
AAAAAhhhhh!!! Excellent, witty and charming! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
awwwwww.....poor little squirrel...glad that big old catfish didn't get you! Cute, Tim! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
LOVED it as always Tim.. so cute ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* this poem was pure delight to read. I love it...the vision you wove made me laugh. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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