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JamesBowie
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0 posted 2002-01-29 11:10 PM


for every action there is
an equal and opposite reaction
That stated, is it true then
that true love causes true pain
or that in losing a dearest part
should we be gaining something new
or does physics only work
outside of the mind
and is it our action that brings
tides of change to come our way
for thought has no opposite
unless we think nothing of each other

A real man

kisses his children goodnight

© Copyright 2002 James Bowie - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2002-01-29 11:15 PM


Oh my this poem made me think of the painful side of love and yes there is that part too...Soooo I guess physics does apply...Well written. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Honeybee
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2 posted 2002-01-29 11:15 PM



A wise write!

and I love your personal quote - how beautifully true!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-01-29 11:19 PM


Excellent write....and I too love your signature!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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4 posted 2002-01-29 11:24 PM




(sigh) Sometimes love can never work out, and there can be a reaction, but sometimes love has chemistry too and can ignite eternity forever! (big hugggsssss) Such wisdom fills your words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-01-29 11:26 PM


I like these thoughts on love...James
JamesBowie
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6 posted 2002-01-29 11:37 PM


funny thing is, this was about life in general-but the take on love is a good part of that, thanks guys and gals
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7 posted 2002-01-30 01:26 AM


I'm so glad to see you posting again, it's been a while. Or have I been asleep? Anyway, this is very thought provoking. And I used the title in my Plagiarism poem. Hope you forgive me, it was a matter of the "physics" of the poem.
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