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Come To This Place Within My Mind
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Come To This Place Within My Mind |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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In your arms I will sleep, in them I will rest In my heart I will keep, deep within my chest. In my thoughts you are, through the waking day In my memory I file, ever there to always stay. Visions from the fog that enter my eyes clear. Thoughts that come like comets from the stars. Flowing water wishes washing over earthen dam. Sighs echoing off distant granite canyon walls. Our love is all these things and so much more. Beauty seen by both, admired and appreciated. Warmth of the sun flowing in veins of hearts. Breeze of contentment cooling the anxieties. Boundless love covering the vastness of earth. Admiration deeper than the depths of space. Kindness of Spring flowers, a gently rain. Trust formed by the mountains high above. Our love is all these things and so much more. Beauty seen by both, admired and appreciated. Warmth of the sun flowing in veins of hearts. Breeze of contentment cooling the anxieties. Boundless love covering the vastness of earth. Admiration deeper than the depths of space. Kindness of Spring flowers, a gently rain. Trust formed by the mountains high above. I feel this when in the Glen of memory. A fresh, flower covered expanse within me. Bees of passion and desire flying endlessly. The light of a full moon entering my eyes. With you...all this is felt..Without you gone. Come to this place where I will comfort. Let my lips feed you the strength of love. Our life’s journey long, steadily goes on. [This message has been edited by Magnus (01-28-2002 11:22 PM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
wow barry this is so heartfelt. Thank you for the enjoyable read. Say..do you have a brother my age? hehhehehe just kidding  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh gosh this poem just feels so good...like being wrapped in someone's arms...*grin* don't mind me...I am just in a very romantic mood tonight. I love this, Magnus...it is so very romantic. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
A beautiful piece Barry....Romance and tender emotion penned in every line.I tip my hat to you my friend!!! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Magnus, there is so much love in this poem. I loved this verse "I feel this when in the Glen of memory. A fresh, flower covered expanse within me. Bees of passion and desire flying endlessly. The light of a full moon entering my eyes." How beautiful is that..lovely, floria Floria |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
the very first poem I wrote was about a glen, so of course I love this. But what I really love about your poetry and what you put up here is there is no pretense, it is sincere and that my friend is rare. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (sigh) Again your romantic heart lights these pages with loves magic, sweet Barry, this is soooooooo beautiful! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may she always find happiness in the place in your heart as you are destined to in hers always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your first stanza was so pure, it was all I needed to read to know I would love this ( of course I read the rest too)...thanks *s Maureen "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." (J.Garland) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-29-2002 04:25 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this one Barry..... Would love to wander through your mind anyday! What an amazing trip that would be...!! ~Hugs Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ 'Flowing water wishes washing over earthen dam. Sighs echoing off distant granite canyon walls.' What vivid imagery pops into my mind at the read of you~ This is sincerely lovely, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You are blessed to have this love and be able to write of it...enjoyed this very much...James |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
The most perfectly romantic poem I've ever read!!!! BEAUTIFUL and PASSIONATE. ***Ivy Rose |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Barry....you are truly the master of romantic poetry. This one tugs at the heartstrings!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"In your arms I will sleep, in them I will rest In my heart I will keep, deep within my chest. In my thoughts you are, through the waking day In my memory I file, ever there to always stay." So romantic and tender! I did more than file this one 'in memory' I borrowed the title and included it in my Plagiarism medley. |
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