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jennirey
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 198
North Richland HillsTx

0 posted 2002-01-29 10:15 PM

I am trying to sleep
Yet I cannot
You invade my every thought
Every dream
Every sense

I bury my head in the pillow
I do not find slumber
Only the smell of your hair
Wafting in my face
Reminding me of you

Not that I need reminding
Your love is ever present
Wherever I look
Wherever I go
Whatever I see

Nor am I complaining
The lack of sleep is not a hardship
For I would gladly trade an eternity
Of nocturnal bliss
To touch your lips
With a passionate kiss

Ladyhawke
Member

since 2001-09-01

Posts 86

1 posted 2002-01-29 10:33 PM

I am not good at taking apart the poetry of others; I am not in a position to critique. But I like this poem because I can relate to what you say.

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

2 posted 2002-01-29 10:35 PM

This is very pretty, jennirey. Thanks for sharing.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Chrissy
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 81
Idaho, no I am not a farmer!

3 posted 2002-01-29 10:38 PM

I can totally relate to this..I thin nerly everone can.
Thanks
Chrissy

Dance like noone is watching
Sing like noone is listening
Love like you'll never be hurt
Live like its Heaven on earth

HUGS AND KISSES TO ALL!!!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-29 11:13 PM

(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is such a gorgeous dedication of true loves touch! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true timeless gem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-01-29 11:41 PM

"The lack of sleep is not a hardship
For I would gladly trade an eternity
Of nocturnal bliss"
Now that's a great way to deal with insomnia! Well done, Jennirey.
Don't go to sleep too early now. Your title is in my Plagiarism poem.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (01-30-2002 01:10 AM).]

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